| "Jewel of the Chaotic Souls" Reviews/Comments [ 133 ] |
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Reviewed By: Ryuko [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2004 20:44 CDT
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It is sooo fun to stumble across a good fic like I did w/ this one! ^_^ this is a wonderful story! I understand about school and all too... (expiriencing the exact same problem)
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Reviewed By: insaneAUTHORESS (not logged in) On: October 06, 2004 19:34 CDT
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wow O_O what to say what to say... Perfection. It was great the 'chaotic souls' was interesting. The story kicks, I was hanging on to every word! Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: the sorceress [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2004 01:51 CDT
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HEY! there it is! ^_^ yay! ok i am honestly leaving now. ^_^
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Reviewed By: the sorceress [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2004 01:41 CDT
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AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHRRRRRRRRGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHH. i just left a long detailed reveiw and I CANT SEE IT! T_T ohwell. be the psycic and see it... >.<
the Jaganashi
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Reviewed By: the sorceress [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2004 01:34 CDT
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WOW. once again i am amazed by how everying flows. THANKS for more evil-funny skewl situations! ^_^ one thing you could have done better was explain how they got to the meeting placcy and how shippo got there. oh and i forgot (i think ^_^;) but kurama is 500 years old... so unless kurama was born when his mother met kagome it wouldnt really work... i dont remember quite what you said bout that tho... *heh* anyways this is really awesome, and i really really love the way you describe kagome's art! it is so awesome! that is DEFINATLY one of your strong points! :3 you should really write more about their art classes! i also like the evil-kagome person! she seems kool! ahhh... i should really do my homework now... ~the sorceress- Kerina Silvil-Jaganashi (with seven hundred and thirty, i mean sixhundred and eighty characters left) (654)
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Reviewed By: SapphireGems On: October 04, 2004 23:08 CDT
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plz update more soon!
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Reviewed By: nylsor [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2004 14:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great. Please update. I'm begging here.
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Reviewed By: Tori-chan On: September 29, 2004 16:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i lvoe this story i love this storty i love this story i love this story lol pleace update soon i want to know more about that happens
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Title: Chapter 12
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2004 01:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome update. UPdate again soon. Can't wait to see who kidnapped the three, how they get them back, how you bring Kagome and Kurama together.
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Reviewed By: tbiris(not logged in) On: August 08, 2004 08:35 CDT
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ack, what's up with Kagome? Or is it because she can't purify family... grr.... so annoying! All these questions without answers!
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Reviewed By: InsaneAuthoress [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2004 22:22 CDT
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Awww that great! What in the hell happened to Souta?! I need to know update soon! Man this chapter was perfect, well written and everything
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Reviewed By: Lara J. On: August 06, 2004 07:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I say: This is one of the best fanfictions I've read in a long time! You managed to keep the basic, original storylines rather nicely and still managed to merge the two in a smooth fashion. Very nice. YOUR storyline, as well, seems really interesting. Cant wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: GemJewel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2004 20:43 CDT
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who took Rin, Souta, and Koenma?? update more soon cause this is great!!!!
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Reviewed By: YoukoS On: August 01, 2004 08:01 CDT
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Very very nice. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: flygirl 13 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2004 16:29 CDT
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this is off to an awesome start plz i know you hear this all the time but plz update as soon as possible
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