| "Will you be mine?" Reviews/Comments [ 230 ] |
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Reviewed By: xfade2blackx On: June 30, 2005 16:20 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
u have 2 update soon b.c this story is frikin awesome!!! come on! u kno u wanna update *poke poke*
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Reviewed By: nekofluffylover (not logged in) On: June 29, 2005 17:35 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yea i think i have an addiction to ur story lol UPDATE PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ ur fics like super amazingly awesome!!! so yea plz update
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Reviewed By: doujo (dlg) On: June 29, 2005 10:47 EDT
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errr... stop editing the story and add the chapter instead!!! grrrr... each time I'm checking my mail and I see the title of your story I'm like "yay! she updated!" but when I read the mail... "DAMN IT!!!! she just edited the previous chapters!!!!!" so please... PLEASE! Write the next chapter... we're all ready to be "HOLY FUCKING SHIT"! We've all waited long enough... so less editing and more updates!! Please?
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Title: YO!!!!
Reviewed By: inuyoukai24 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2005 20:01 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH MY FUCKING GOD!!! THIS STORY IS SOOOOO GOOD!!!! I just sat and read the entire 28 chapters, I can't wait til you update! Poor Sota and Shippo...WHAT HAPPENED TO RIN???? *dies of anxiousness* I would love you talk to you some more, my e-mail address is mari@cityofshalom.com, and please update soon!!! I want to know what happens!!
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Reviewed By: MORE... On: June 28, 2005 19:24 EDT
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It's been like a month, post more, damnit. ; ;..
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Title: OMG!
Reviewed By: chibiruler1990 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2005 17:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok how should i put this......IT WAS FREAKING ALSWOME! dude you are a kick a** writer! ok i dont care if anyone else reveiws you i want some more of the story!PLEASE! Im on my hands and knees! ok but seriesly i really enjoyed your story and i liked the originality. I wonder what your other work will be like???If they are as good as this one i hope they are done or i will go nets!lol but seriously please please please im beging please update it soon. and i almost forgot please email me if you can for when the newest chapter is up i am so bad at keeping trake of storys......bad trate i have. well i will review the minite i read the next one and the next one so at least you know you still have a fan! o and i just wanted to say wow on the whole shippo and sota think personally i liked it it was something unexspected...
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Title: O.O
Reviewed By: babyatemu On: June 27, 2005 01:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O.O omg... i loved that... it's such a great story... please.. hurry up and update... Thank you!!! *can't wait to find out whats going to happen next* *is confused about one thing* What happen to Rin?? is she dead?? umm if you get the chance e-mail at keanufan2003@hotmail.com... Thank you!!!
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Title: Ur story
Reviewed By: aleff On: June 24, 2005 12:37 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok....what was up with the whole gay guy thing....how old r u n y do u write that perverted stuff....isnt it hard to write or do u take pleasure in ur sickness....the story itself is a great story n very clever...i think it is a lot like the lord of the rings because the whole taking over the world thing....the only thing i would change is make ur typing more readable and take the whole gay thing out cuz it almost ruined the story for me...i was about to puke because u go into such great detail and i seriously wonder what kind of person u r....wow thank 4 listening....n finish the story without pervertedness...lol
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Reviewed By: catalina27 On: June 21, 2005 19:22 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The "next one is like wholly fucking shit" HUH? Well where is it...*glares evily* I really love this story and you better finish it...or else
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Reviewed By: InuGrrrl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2005 23:15 EDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoa...by far the most violent & creative fic i have read so far. I didn't see half of that shit coming! Then there's the fact that we still don't know what really happened to Rin or who raped & killed souta (all of that was wildly insane btw) -update soon...please don't leave us hanging on something this good.
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Reviewed By: pheonia On: June 19, 2005 14:19 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
interesting, I love the idea of inuyasha having a hanyou night when he's human.
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Reviewed By: sunshine161820 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2005 18:42 EDT
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update soon!!! i'm ready to be like "HOLY FUCKING SHIT!"
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Reviewed By: doujo (dlg) On: May 30, 2005 19:26 EDT
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yay! You've updated :D I'm really happy. I hope you'll really update soon !! ^^ I really wonder why Naraku has to see her... (no rape, please no rape!! I would be so sad for Kagome....!!) well, update soon please!!!! ^^
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Title: Woohoo!
Reviewed By: rin(NLI){cuz I'm lazy >< } On: May 30, 2005 13:54 EDT
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YEAH! An update! YAY! Lets see, I reviewed on April 30 so thats a full month. I kind of expected a longer wait. But I'm not complaning!^^ I'm glad Songo and Miroku lived. What does Nuraku have in store for Kagome? I got shivers when she was walking down the hall. Sheesh, you sure know how to put a reader right in the story. Hey, wouldnt Nuraku be able to smell Inuyasha on her? Well, glad you updated(even more glad to hear another update is coming soon) So take care!^^
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Reviewed By: sunshine161820 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2005 13:59 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i read ur story and i didnt see anyone of that coming!! plz dont let anyone else die!!! i'm already mad shippo's dead!!! plz update cuz i read ur story and i want to know what happens!! p.s. hope u find a job...i'm looking for one too!!
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