| "What the Eyes Can't See" Reviews/Comments [ 38 ] |
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2008 03:03 CST
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you can download 'open office' (a free program that is very similar to 'microsoft office') at: openoffice.org/ ♦you can use 'open office writer' (similar to 'microsoft word') and it does a whole lot more than 'notebook'. ♠ another thing you can download is 'wordweb', it is a one touch dictionary/thesaurus ~just highlight a word and click the icon in your toolbar tray next to the clock and it will give you the definition and alternate words you can use: wordweb.info/contact.html ♣ i recommend them for the authors i beta read for. as a matter of fact, i have both 'word' and 'writer' and there is a couple options in 'writer' that i wish were in 'word'. ♦ your story is really good but watch the malapropisms; things like: patients should be patience. things like that can be the difference between a really good story and a great story. ♥ thank you, ginny
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Reviewed By: Totally Kawaii [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2007 11:44 CST
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Oh... my... God... STUPID BAKA DUMB IDIOTIC INSENSITIVE DAMN DIPSHIT CRAZY UNTHINKING TWO-TIMING IMPULSIVE EGOTISTICAL BASTARD BRASH ARROGANT SELF-CENTERED JERK ARROGANT NINNY DOLT IGNORAMUS DUNCE FUCKING-DUMB INSANE LUNKHEAD SIMPLETON OAF BITCH-LOVING CRAZY CLAY-POT-PROMISING HOT-TEMPERED INU! *tears in eyes* DAMN him for being SUCH AN INSENSITIVE BASTARD and making Kagome feel so INFERIOR to a BITCH and a CLAY POT! ... okay. Update soon!!!! RESCUE SANGO AND MIROKU BEFORE IT'S TOOO LAAAAAATE!!!
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Reviewed By: miley On: January 20, 2007 17:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i absolutly *LOVED* it!PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEZ update soon!
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Title: Yay
Reviewed By: SpookyKitty [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2006 10:47 CDT
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YAY you updated. That I must say took awhile. bet none the less at least there is a new chapter. I can't wait for more chapters from all you uncompleted stories.
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Title: dark hanyou
Reviewed By: dark hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2006 23:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
dont let anyone get u down, with spelling mistakes, just keep going on the story, it is so good to read, hey, we all make mistakes, and people out there who disagrre fuck uQ!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: reviewing On: September 30, 2005 01:56 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
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You need to get a beta reader. Is English your second language? Is that why you have so many spelling and word usage problems? You use words incorrectly a lot and the spelling is horrible. Get someone to help you.
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Reviewed By: reader1 On: September 29, 2005 17:18 CDT
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yay! an update! finally :)
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2005 02:29 CDT
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It's been a while since you updated and it's shame because this story is great. I even told my readers to check it out. Please don't abandon it.
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Reviewed By: matzes1 On: July 09, 2005 14:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWESOME STORY!!!! WRITE MORE CHAPTERS TO THIS STORY!!!!! PLEASE!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: reader1 On: December 03, 2004 18:14 CST
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i really hope you update. i like this story.
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Reviewed By: blah;blah On: October 15, 2004 13:45 CDT
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Please continue
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Reviewed By: more? On: September 03, 2004 20:59 CDT
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when's the next update? *begs*
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Title: Sweet
Reviewed By: killeryash#1 & cherryblossom On: August 10, 2004 16:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
my cuz and I loved it.Keep the good work and write more chaps.
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Title: Info
Reviewed By: DeathChildInuLover666 On: August 09, 2004 02:14 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok i like your story alot!!! I want more please!! I mean really that was so so so so good!! I need to read more so hurry and update please!! And one more thing you should not keep this story under G> PG> or PG-13!!! well PG-13 might be alright for know but u might want to rate it going into R if theres gunna be a lemon!!!! DUH!!! SO UPDATE SOON AND CHANGE THE RATINGS BEFORE YOU GET INTO TROUBLE WITH FLAMERS!!!!
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Reviewed By: InuyashaGirlie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2004 16:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! Great chapter! I just love your story so much! It keeps getting better and better! I love fluffy scenes! That was so sweet, when both Kagome and Inuyasha were in the kitchen after having the misunderstanding and they kissed! Yay! That was excellent! Well great work! Update again soon when you can! :) I'll be eagerly awaiting the next chapter!
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Title: falcony32
Reviewed By: falcony32 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2004 23:52 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Keep it up.
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness(n.s.o.) On: July 16, 2004 00:46 CDT
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Stupid Houjo!!!! Stupid stupid stupid stupid!!!!!!!! He's just jealous and he hurt Inu's feelings!!! Kagome should punch him!!! All that traveling with Inuyasha she should be able to throw a good enough punch to put some eye shadow on him!!!!! But on the bright side, Inuyasha is so sweet when he shows his sensitive side!!! Now on to you! Where have you been?! *taps foot* How could you leave me hanging like that?! And you made me cry *turns back on you as tears build up in eyes* You don't love me anymore!! You just put up that chapter to make me be quiet!! I mean look at how short it was! *wails* I'll leave you alone now *sniff* Bye *walks away looking defeated*
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Reviewed By: ixchen [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2004 21:35 CDT
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wow.. i liked it.. i also liked your other stories.. i just forgot to review.. thanks for the story
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2004 11:03 CDT
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Luna? Luna, where are you? I never thought you would leave me hanging like this! *starts to sob*
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Reviewed By: Star-Child20 On: May 27, 2004 10:00 CDT
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If you want another good book aboput Vamps, try readin Amelia Atwater-Rhodes. She has some awsome books, like In the forest of the night and Demon in my view. Keep up the good work, i hope you add a new chappi soon ^_^
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Reviewed By: Hyperactive frogchild On: May 25, 2004 04:17 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I love this story, the storyline is original and inuyasha is soooo kawaii when he's all helpless! keep up the good work and hurry up and update so we can find out who the mysterious watching people are! xxx
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Reviewed By: Usagitsukino [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2004 11:40 CDT
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^___^This chapter was marvellous!!!It's so CUTE! Please update soon!! =)
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Reviewed By: Picky reader On: May 20, 2004 00:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Did you know that "Iie" is considered so rude that most Japanese never use that particular word when they tell someone 'no'? Did you know that in the whole Inuyasha series, that word has only been used once and Naraku was the one who said it? Please ease off on the use of Japanese words. It gets annoying, especially when words are not used correctly. This is not a flame. I like your story and I hope you continue it, but please don't make obscure references to books and then tell people to go look for the meaning on their own and please stop using so much Japanese. Thank you.
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness(not signed on) On: May 19, 2004 00:29 CDT
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That was such a sweet chapter!!!!!!!!!!! So much wonderful fluff!!!!!!!!! But who was watching them??? It could be Hojo but that would be freaky that he's following Kagome around. And someone was watching Sango and Miroku too right??? Update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: oracle44 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2004 21:29 CDT
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Another cute chapter. I've been meening to read "Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy" and in one of my fics I put a reference to a "Star Trek Voyager" episode that had a reference to Hitchhiker's so I should read it. Oh and everybody should read the Dune series or at least the first 3 books. Anyway can't wait for next chapter.
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Title: EXCELLENT
Reviewed By: InuyashaGirlie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2004 21:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! Great chapter! So you had to start over? Well I'm just glad that you finally got out a new update because I have to tell you it was EXCELLENT!! I give you a whole auditorium worth of applauds! Brovo! Brovo! SO sweet! Well can't wait for the next chapter so please update again soon when you can! :) P.S. I know you don't have too many reviews for this story but still it is great so you should never give up on it! I do want to suggest that if you don't have it posted on Fanfiction.net you should consider posting it there! Well bye!
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Reviewed By: bscl43 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2004 16:52 CDT
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what is 6x7? anyway this fic is just to cute. Poor Hojo, I do feel slightly bad for him but i'm sure he'll bounce back. Can't wait for more keep writing
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Reviewed By: tearosea On: May 18, 2004 16:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ive really enjoyed reading your story! If you like 1984 try a book called Anthem by Ayn Rand, same basic theme but a little different take on the subject matter!
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Reviewed By: oracle44 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2004 19:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
soo freaking cute.
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Reviewed By: Star-Child On: April 29, 2004 06:21 CDT
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New chappy soon pwease *Stares at the screen waiting for a new chapter* You can have a cookie! *gives cookie*
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