| "What the Eyes Can't See" Reviews/Comments [ 38 ] |
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Reviewed By: matzes1 On: July 09, 2005 14:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWESOME STORY!!!! WRITE MORE CHAPTERS TO THIS STORY!!!!! PLEASE!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: reader1 On: December 03, 2004 18:14 CST
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i really hope you update. i like this story.
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Reviewed By: blah;blah On: October 15, 2004 13:45 CDT
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Please continue
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Reviewed By: more? On: September 03, 2004 20:59 CDT
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when's the next update? *begs*
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Title: Sweet
Reviewed By: killeryash#1 & cherryblossom On: August 10, 2004 16:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
my cuz and I loved it.Keep the good work and write more chaps.
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Title: Info
Reviewed By: DeathChildInuLover666 On: August 09, 2004 02:14 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok i like your story alot!!! I want more please!! I mean really that was so so so so good!! I need to read more so hurry and update please!! And one more thing you should not keep this story under G> PG> or PG-13!!! well PG-13 might be alright for know but u might want to rate it going into R if theres gunna be a lemon!!!! DUH!!! SO UPDATE SOON AND CHANGE THE RATINGS BEFORE YOU GET INTO TROUBLE WITH FLAMERS!!!!
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Reviewed By: InuyashaGirlie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2004 16:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! Great chapter! I just love your story so much! It keeps getting better and better! I love fluffy scenes! That was so sweet, when both Kagome and Inuyasha were in the kitchen after having the misunderstanding and they kissed! Yay! That was excellent! Well great work! Update again soon when you can! :) I'll be eagerly awaiting the next chapter!
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Title: falcony32
Reviewed By: falcony32 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2004 23:52 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Keep it up.
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness(n.s.o.) On: July 16, 2004 00:46 CDT
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Stupid Houjo!!!! Stupid stupid stupid stupid!!!!!!!! He's just jealous and he hurt Inu's feelings!!! Kagome should punch him!!! All that traveling with Inuyasha she should be able to throw a good enough punch to put some eye shadow on him!!!!! But on the bright side, Inuyasha is so sweet when he shows his sensitive side!!! Now on to you! Where have you been?! *taps foot* How could you leave me hanging like that?! And you made me cry *turns back on you as tears build up in eyes* You don't love me anymore!! You just put up that chapter to make me be quiet!! I mean look at how short it was! *wails* I'll leave you alone now *sniff* Bye *walks away looking defeated*
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Reviewed By: ixchen [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2004 21:35 CDT
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wow.. i liked it.. i also liked your other stories.. i just forgot to review.. thanks for the story
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2004 11:03 CDT
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Luna? Luna, where are you? I never thought you would leave me hanging like this! *starts to sob*
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Reviewed By: Star-Child20 On: May 27, 2004 10:00 CDT
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If you want another good book aboput Vamps, try readin Amelia Atwater-Rhodes. She has some awsome books, like In the forest of the night and Demon in my view. Keep up the good work, i hope you add a new chappi soon ^_^
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Reviewed By: Hyperactive frogchild On: May 25, 2004 04:17 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I love this story, the storyline is original and inuyasha is soooo kawaii when he's all helpless! keep up the good work and hurry up and update so we can find out who the mysterious watching people are! xxx
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Reviewed By: Usagitsukino [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2004 11:40 CDT
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^___^This chapter was marvellous!!!It's so CUTE! Please update soon!! =)
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Reviewed By: Picky reader On: May 20, 2004 00:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Did you know that "Iie" is considered so rude that most Japanese never use that particular word when they tell someone 'no'? Did you know that in the whole Inuyasha series, that word has only been used once and Naraku was the one who said it? Please ease off on the use of Japanese words. It gets annoying, especially when words are not used correctly. This is not a flame. I like your story and I hope you continue it, but please don't make obscure references to books and then tell people to go look for the meaning on their own and please stop using so much Japanese. Thank you.
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