| "What the Eyes Can't See" Reviews/Comments [ 38 ] |
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2008 03:03 CST
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you can download 'open office' (a free program that is very similar to 'microsoft office') at: openoffice.org/ ♦you can use 'open office writer' (similar to 'microsoft word') and it does a whole lot more than 'notebook'. ♠ another thing you can download is 'wordweb', it is a one touch dictionary/thesaurus ~just highlight a word and click the icon in your toolbar tray next to the clock and it will give you the definition and alternate words you can use: wordweb.info/contact.html ♣ i recommend them for the authors i beta read for. as a matter of fact, i have both 'word' and 'writer' and there is a couple options in 'writer' that i wish were in 'word'. ♦ your story is really good but watch the malapropisms; things like: patients should be patience. things like that can be the difference between a really good story and a great story. ♥ thank you, ginny
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Reviewed By: Totally Kawaii [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2007 11:44 CST
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Oh... my... God... STUPID BAKA DUMB IDIOTIC INSENSITIVE DAMN DIPSHIT CRAZY UNTHINKING TWO-TIMING IMPULSIVE EGOTISTICAL BASTARD BRASH ARROGANT SELF-CENTERED JERK ARROGANT NINNY DOLT IGNORAMUS DUNCE FUCKING-DUMB INSANE LUNKHEAD SIMPLETON OAF BITCH-LOVING CRAZY CLAY-POT-PROMISING HOT-TEMPERED INU! *tears in eyes* DAMN him for being SUCH AN INSENSITIVE BASTARD and making Kagome feel so INFERIOR to a BITCH and a CLAY POT! ... okay. Update soon!!!! RESCUE SANGO AND MIROKU BEFORE IT'S TOOO LAAAAAATE!!!
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Reviewed By: miley On: January 20, 2007 17:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i absolutly *LOVED* it!PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEZ update soon!
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Title: Yay
Reviewed By: SpookyKitty [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2006 10:47 CDT
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YAY you updated. That I must say took awhile. bet none the less at least there is a new chapter. I can't wait for more chapters from all you uncompleted stories.
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Title: dark hanyou
Reviewed By: dark hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2006 23:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
dont let anyone get u down, with spelling mistakes, just keep going on the story, it is so good to read, hey, we all make mistakes, and people out there who disagrre fuck uQ!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: reviewing On: September 30, 2005 01:56 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
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You need to get a beta reader. Is English your second language? Is that why you have so many spelling and word usage problems? You use words incorrectly a lot and the spelling is horrible. Get someone to help you.
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Reviewed By: reader1 On: September 29, 2005 17:18 CDT
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yay! an update! finally :)
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2005 02:29 CDT
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It's been a while since you updated and it's shame because this story is great. I even told my readers to check it out. Please don't abandon it.
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Reviewed By: matzes1 On: July 09, 2005 14:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWESOME STORY!!!! WRITE MORE CHAPTERS TO THIS STORY!!!!! PLEASE!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: reader1 On: December 03, 2004 18:14 CST
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i really hope you update. i like this story.
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Reviewed By: blah;blah On: October 15, 2004 13:45 CDT
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Please continue
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Reviewed By: more? On: September 03, 2004 20:59 CDT
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when's the next update? *begs*
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Title: Sweet
Reviewed By: killeryash#1 & cherryblossom On: August 10, 2004 16:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
my cuz and I loved it.Keep the good work and write more chaps.
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Title: Info
Reviewed By: DeathChildInuLover666 On: August 09, 2004 02:14 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok i like your story alot!!! I want more please!! I mean really that was so so so so good!! I need to read more so hurry and update please!! And one more thing you should not keep this story under G> PG> or PG-13!!! well PG-13 might be alright for know but u might want to rate it going into R if theres gunna be a lemon!!!! DUH!!! SO UPDATE SOON AND CHANGE THE RATINGS BEFORE YOU GET INTO TROUBLE WITH FLAMERS!!!!
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Reviewed By: InuyashaGirlie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2004 16:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! Great chapter! I just love your story so much! It keeps getting better and better! I love fluffy scenes! That was so sweet, when both Kagome and Inuyasha were in the kitchen after having the misunderstanding and they kissed! Yay! That was excellent! Well great work! Update again soon when you can! :) I'll be eagerly awaiting the next chapter!
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