| "What the Eyes Can't See" Reviews/Comments [ 38 ] |
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Title: falcony32
Reviewed By: falcony32 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2004 23:52 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Keep it up.
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness(n.s.o.) On: July 16, 2004 00:46 CDT
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Stupid Houjo!!!! Stupid stupid stupid stupid!!!!!!!! He's just jealous and he hurt Inu's feelings!!! Kagome should punch him!!! All that traveling with Inuyasha she should be able to throw a good enough punch to put some eye shadow on him!!!!! But on the bright side, Inuyasha is so sweet when he shows his sensitive side!!! Now on to you! Where have you been?! *taps foot* How could you leave me hanging like that?! And you made me cry *turns back on you as tears build up in eyes* You don't love me anymore!! You just put up that chapter to make me be quiet!! I mean look at how short it was! *wails* I'll leave you alone now *sniff* Bye *walks away looking defeated*
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Reviewed By: ixchen [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2004 21:35 CDT
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wow.. i liked it.. i also liked your other stories.. i just forgot to review.. thanks for the story
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2004 11:03 CDT
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Luna? Luna, where are you? I never thought you would leave me hanging like this! *starts to sob*
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Reviewed By: Star-Child20 On: May 27, 2004 10:00 CDT
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If you want another good book aboput Vamps, try readin Amelia Atwater-Rhodes. She has some awsome books, like In the forest of the night and Demon in my view. Keep up the good work, i hope you add a new chappi soon ^_^
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Reviewed By: Hyperactive frogchild On: May 25, 2004 04:17 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I love this story, the storyline is original and inuyasha is soooo kawaii when he's all helpless! keep up the good work and hurry up and update so we can find out who the mysterious watching people are! xxx
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Reviewed By: Usagitsukino [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2004 11:40 CDT
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^___^This chapter was marvellous!!!It's so CUTE! Please update soon!! =)
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Reviewed By: Picky reader On: May 20, 2004 00:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Did you know that "Iie" is considered so rude that most Japanese never use that particular word when they tell someone 'no'? Did you know that in the whole Inuyasha series, that word has only been used once and Naraku was the one who said it? Please ease off on the use of Japanese words. It gets annoying, especially when words are not used correctly. This is not a flame. I like your story and I hope you continue it, but please don't make obscure references to books and then tell people to go look for the meaning on their own and please stop using so much Japanese. Thank you.
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness(not signed on) On: May 19, 2004 00:29 CDT
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That was such a sweet chapter!!!!!!!!!!! So much wonderful fluff!!!!!!!!! But who was watching them??? It could be Hojo but that would be freaky that he's following Kagome around. And someone was watching Sango and Miroku too right??? Update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: oracle44 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2004 21:29 CDT
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Another cute chapter. I've been meening to read "Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy" and in one of my fics I put a reference to a "Star Trek Voyager" episode that had a reference to Hitchhiker's so I should read it. Oh and everybody should read the Dune series or at least the first 3 books. Anyway can't wait for next chapter.
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Title: EXCELLENT
Reviewed By: InuyashaGirlie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2004 21:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! Great chapter! So you had to start over? Well I'm just glad that you finally got out a new update because I have to tell you it was EXCELLENT!! I give you a whole auditorium worth of applauds! Brovo! Brovo! SO sweet! Well can't wait for the next chapter so please update again soon when you can! :) P.S. I know you don't have too many reviews for this story but still it is great so you should never give up on it! I do want to suggest that if you don't have it posted on Fanfiction.net you should consider posting it there! Well bye!
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Reviewed By: bscl43 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2004 16:52 CDT
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what is 6x7? anyway this fic is just to cute. Poor Hojo, I do feel slightly bad for him but i'm sure he'll bounce back. Can't wait for more keep writing
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Reviewed By: tearosea On: May 18, 2004 16:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ive really enjoyed reading your story! If you like 1984 try a book called Anthem by Ayn Rand, same basic theme but a little different take on the subject matter!
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Reviewed By: oracle44 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2004 19:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
soo freaking cute.
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Reviewed By: Star-Child On: April 29, 2004 06:21 CDT
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New chappy soon pwease *Stares at the screen waiting for a new chapter* You can have a cookie! *gives cookie*
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