| "The House of Mirth" Reviews/Comments [ 46 ] |
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Title: Excellent =D
Reviewed By: Mir0kusama On: October 07, 2004 03:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A great storyline! Keep up the good work. Okay, the lemons are pretty disturbing but otherwise the story is great - especially the suspense. I can't wait to read more, and I hope someone pours gasoline on Kikyou and burns her! KEEP IT UP AND UPDATE SOON!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Ardinae On: September 06, 2004 08:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow that is so intense. Makes you appreciate the life you have. To even think things like that happen (and I know they do I am not that naive)makes me want to curl up and cry for those who can't because of the situation they are in. I am looking forward to reading more. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Hellkeeper [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2004 20:54 CDT
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i like this story
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Title: Miracle Dispenser
Reviewed By: The_Huntress On: August 12, 2004 14:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, I am really enjoying this fanfic of yours(as I do all your others) but I was wondering if Inuyasha and Kagome are ever going to at least meet? If not have a relationship? Hehe, o yes and that Shippo is very cute the way you portrayed him:D... G2G, Luv 'n' Hugs, Assassin Chiq
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Reviewed By: Finish(not signed in) On: August 09, 2004 17:48 CDT
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I like the way you've decribed things so far. The way you use the characters' point of view to tellt he story is pretty interesting and I haven't yet seen any kind of story written in first-person-view that actually has a pretty good plot. As for adding Kagome anytime soon, I don't think you should rush it opr anything. Take your time because you don't want to just throw her in their, she has to be brought in at the right moment otherwise it might end up like all those other stories where it's all about sex and no plot. Anyway, good story.
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Reviewed By: sakurawolf26 On: August 07, 2004 16:34 CDT
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Hope to hear from kagome soon please update
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Title: Question
Reviewed By: SakuraWolf26 On: August 07, 2004 16:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What are the couples for this story? I like this story please update it soon.
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Reviewed By: tiff [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2004 16:05 CDT
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so...is inuyasha going to get his wrist looked at or something, because from teh way you describe it, it sounds like the bone is completely shattered. ouch! and...when might Kagome be coming into the picture? She's the only person you haven't mentioned yet.
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Reviewed By: nauriell [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2004 16:04 CDT
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so...is inuyasha going to get his wrist looked at or something, because from teh way you describe it, it sounds like the bone is completely shattered. ouch! and...when might Kagome be coming into the picture? She's the only person you haven't mentioned yet.
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Reviewed By: nauriell [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2004 16:04 CDT
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so...is inuyasha going to get his wrist looked at or something, because from teh way you describe it, it sounds like the bone is completely shattered. ouch! and...when might Kagome be coming into the picture? She's the only person you haven't mentioned yet.
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Reviewed By: nauriell [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2004 16:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
so...is inuyasha going to get his wrist looked at or something, because from teh way you describe it, it sounds like the bone is completely shattered. ouch! and...when might Kagome be coming into the picture? She's the only person you haven't mentioned yet.
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Reviewed By: Eartha [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2004 23:17 CDT
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Well, the lemon was very, very disturbing...but, I'm really interested in the rest of the story. I can't wait to see what happens to Inu and Shippo, and how Kag is introduced. The only question I have at the moment is how Inu is going to claim shippo as his child when they are obviously of different species. Well, keep up the good work, I can't wait until the next chapter comes out!!
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Reviewed By: me On: June 29, 2004 22:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
i really like ur fic can u please update soon tanks
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Reviewed By: Cindyve13 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2004 12:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
fuk it being ooc. its a hell of a good story. can't wait to see the next chap. I hope they get away from that bastard
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Reviewed By: Coca [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2004 02:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is going well, I'm definitely interested. And I hope that Inu Yasha and Shippou get away! Keep up the good work!
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