| "The House of Mirth" Reviews/Comments [ 46 ] |
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Reviewed By: daniy [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2004 15:56 CDT
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i agree with Hanyougal, i didn't like the story either. maybe if you hadn't of be so rude to me i may have liked it, but i couldn't get over the fact that you made fun of my mistake.
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Reviewed By: Anubis_Himura [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2004 22:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story. It is very intriguing and I love your style of writing. I am interested to see how the story evolves. The first three chapters were very well written and I look forward to future updates. ^_^
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Title: Hanyougal
Reviewed By: Hanyougal [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2004 16:08 CDT
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Hey, you made me feel sucky about my story so uh my turn, it sucked, made no sense, and was kinda jumpy. You know personally if you hadn't talked smack about my fic I would have loved yours, I am just the revenge kind of person. You can hate me and call me a bitch, I wont care. Well it was an awesome story so you know but well, I said in the beggening I can't write, so I told you. Anyways it was alright. Later! ~Hanyougal
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Reviewed By: SilverGirl37 On: May 14, 2004 18:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I KNOW THE DOCTER IS!!! I KNOW THE DOCTER IS!!! I LOVE YOUR FIC PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!! I CAN'T WAIT TILL YOUR NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Cindyve13 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2004 23:33 CDT
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I love the originality of this story. It's definatly different. lol at the begining I did think it was kagome too. But please update soon. Your a great writer
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Title: Inu Bitch
Reviewed By: Inuyasha_For_Ever (nli) On: April 05, 2004 20:34 CDT
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yes, the last chapter was very disturbing..............update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2004 17:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I gave you a 9 on fun to read because, obviously, it's not fun reading about Inu Yasha and Shippou getting the crap beaten out of them. I like the spin of having Inu Yasha be "mother" to Shippou. It's pretty dark but I am looking forward to the pair having happier times. If Shippou is Inu Yasha's step brother, I don't understand how Inu Yasha ended up with Onigumo. Was Shippou's Ma Inu Yasha's step mother who, as a widow, married Onigumo?
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Reviewed By: SHIPPO HATER On: April 04, 2004 16:36 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent fic keep making Shippo get the shit beat out of him that little bitch
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Title: Miracle Dispenser
Reviewed By: Jacqueline On: April 04, 2004 13:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG, *tear* that *sniffle* was soo sad *tear*... I thought it was Kagome at first... but then it turned out to be Inuyasha and that makes me even sadder... *sniffle* you have to keep writing, it's got to get better than this right? Kagome will save him... i hope... poor Shippo... *tear* I would beat the shit outta that guy. And then in chapter three you find out that the guy is Onigumo the freaky man who is like a sex slave... to i think Kagura but i am probably wrong... not very good with foresight... anywayz, *tear* i am going to pray for inu... and shippo... poor guys... great story... sad, but great... keep up the great work... Luv and Hugs, Ai Shiteru Assassin_chiq
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha_For_Ever [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2004 22:31 CST
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damn............................*shudders* ewwwwwwwwwwwwwwww......Kikyo, thats just wrong
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Reviewed By: whitmangurl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2004 15:58 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!! that was amazing. I totally thought it was kagome. PLZ write more...:(No cookie for me:(
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Title: OMG
Reviewed By: SivlerGirl37 On: March 13, 2004 14:21 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was soooooooo sad. Pour Shippuo. Awwwwww I feel bad. Like think about all the kids who do get the crap beten out of them. It's sooo sad, but anyway I Like your story alot, please update...
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Title: The Story
Reviewed By: Ancient Wu On: March 13, 2004 04:05 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow that was a real twist Inuyasha taking the beating. but what troubles me the most, I DONT GET MY COOKIE WWWAAAHHHH =(
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Title: Inu Bitch
Reviewed By: Inuyasha_For_Ever [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2004 16:07 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was thinking Naraku beating up Kagome, Inuyasha, thats just unexpected!!!!!! Why would Inuyasha just sit and take the beatings? He would kick whoever person it is ass!!!!! Update please!!!!
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Title: whoa
Reviewed By: nekofluffylover (not signed in) On: March 11, 2004 16:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was excellent i totally thought it was kagome so the thing at the end was like whoa. i love all ur stories and i hope u update soon
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