| "The House of Mirth" Reviews/Comments [ 46 ] |
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Title: interesting!
Reviewed By: VelvetNight [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2005 09:38 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
THis story is interesting indeed! I never would have thought of Onigumo being InuYasha and Shippou's guardian...I also think the setting and the story line itself is highly original!! Great Job. It's also nice how at the beginning ,you made each chapter a seperate POV...I've always been a fan of first person POV, but I must admit that it does have it's limitations. YAOI scene was.....well...that was hott...I've read a couple of fics where InuYasha was bi-sexual, are you taking that same route as well?? Well, I must say great job, and I await your next update!! ~VelvetNight
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Reviewed By: Ardinae On: July 14, 2005 13:27 CDT
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Funny how the insights of others can bring back memories and cause the empathy of one's soul to reach out to another. Great story. I look forward to more.
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Reviewed By: the grace of hatred [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2005 15:55 CDT
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i'll take your warnings more seriously next time.. lol.. i was left short of breath.. cant wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Tiffanie On: June 23, 2005 21:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just started reading your story and i've gotta say i've got no complaints about it. its very original and interesting and if your still looking for a beta reader, i wouldn't mind taking up the task. feel free to email me at Katie8895@aol.com. Keep up with the good work.
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Title: Good Chapter
Reviewed By: QTpie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2005 00:18 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to admit that I usually don't read rape/abuse stories, but the manner in which you handle these issues were very well executed. I really like the interaction between Inu Yasha and Shippou, there's both well characterized despite the setting and circumstances. The only thing I don't completely understand at this point of the story is Inu Yasha's lineage. Was Omigumo his biological father or a step parent and if he is Inu Yasha's real father than does that mean his mother was a demon in order for Inu Yasha to be a hanyou? Perhaps you can offer a little more clarity on this in the future. I previously assumed that Omigumo was Inu Yasha's step father until the recent flash back scene where Inu Yasha actually called him daddy. Anyways, I can't wait to read what you have in store for the future chapters. Keep up the good work and update ASAP, please and thank you. Oh, if you still need a beta, I'm willing to help. I currently beta-ing for another author so I do have experience. Just let me know what works for you, email me at aidlbia@yahoo.ca.
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Reviewed By: nauriell [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2005 19:49 CDT
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I can beta for you. That is, as long as you don't mind me printing it out, writing all over it, and scanning it. Then sending you a scanned copy. I think it's better if people know what's been changed, and also something I like might not be what you like etc. etc... This is a wonderful chapter, seems like the story's really starting to get the ball rolling...or maybe it already was and I just missed it cause I'm kinda zoning.... I don't quite understand what 'Nuya' has to do for Miroku though....a touch confusing that is.
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Reviewed By: Dilly On: May 26, 2005 19:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow... Its inu that is getting beat unstead of Kagome...i really love it...cant wait till u update it... --Dilly--
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Reviewed By: Dilly On: May 11, 2005 21:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I haven't seen an story about Inuyasha and Shippo running away from Naraku and Kikyo or anything like that. Can't wait to read the next chapter. I'm having a great time reading this story so please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Angelteen [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2004 16:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok I would like to say that this is one of the best stories I have ever read and think that you are doing great. Now with that out of the way How dare you accuse me of copying somone elses writing I HAVE NEVER EVEN READ A STORY TITLED SOLICE OR WHATEVER! AND EVEN IF IS THE SAME BEGINING WHATEVER!!!!! YOU SHOULD HAVE KEPT READING AND YOU WOULD HAVE REALIZED THAT MY STORY WAS FROM MY OWN HEAD!!! I DO NOT APPERICATE BEING TOLD I COPY OTHER PEOPLES WRITING! GOT IT?! and matbe you should think about this, some peoples stories sound alike but you need to read more then the beging to understand. what's that saying oh yea DON'T JUDGE A BOOK BY IT'S COVER! And even if you hadn't accused me of plagerizing how dare you talk about my writing that way you could have said it nicer you don't see me doing that to people do you even those with terrible stories. Sorry that this came so late after your review I should have said it sooner... MUCH!
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Reviewed By: HieiWannabe [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2004 15:41 CST
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*sob sob* That part about the whispers was so sad! *tears up tear-soaked tissue* It was almost exactly like the parts of my favorite books that talk about how Cat feels about his mixed-blood. *sniff* Very well done.
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Reviewed By: Lavender Valentine [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2004 06:59 CST
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Your efforts on this chapter certainly produced a great end result! Your use of Inu-Yasha's 'voice' to tell the story is...I hesitate to use this word, but it fits...masterful! Lavender
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Reviewed By: essie2 On: November 03, 2004 00:38 CST
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omg this is great please update
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Reviewed By: HieiWannabe(not logged in) On: October 17, 2004 10:05 CDT
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Gomenasai! I didn't mean to give you my cold, but that would explain why I suddenly feel so much better... :-D
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2004 13:44 CDT
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omg omg that was I don't know but please update soon
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Reviewed By: Xue [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2004 20:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really impressive. Normally, I avoid abuse fics like the plague - they seem to be, by and large, seething hell-pits of poor characterization, melodramatic angst, and naive willingness to skim over the sheer, brutal ugliness that such situations really are. However, you seem to have done the impossible - you have here an abuse fic that is horrific in its detail and peopled with non-OOC characters with reasonable motivations. (Inuyasha's personality, though represented differently from the customary depiction, is, given the circumstances of his upbringing, immediately recognizable.) It also has genuine suspense - it's been a long time since I last read a fic and was genuinely worried about what was going to happen to a character. This has sheer affective force behind it in spades. Only thing I'm having a bit of trouble swallowing is the characterization of Kikyou. However, in a fandom in which Kikyou is frequently warped into a vicious, psychotic ditz, this characterization is still above par. It's not true to her original character, but, hey, Kikyou as kinky dominatrix isn't something I've seen before, and it's a far more interesting and intelligent characterization than many others. So, hey. Congratulations, and please keep it up.
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