| "InuYasha a modern fairytail." Reviews/Comments [ 85 ] |
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Title: calm down there buddy
Reviewed By: chlo On: May 26, 2004 22:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
calm down there buddy, i'll review... i really enjoy the story so i keep reading. you need a hug and some candy.
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Title: Hey...
Reviewed By: Hikaru1617 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2004 21:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
I am enjoying your fic, especially since you've started using your editing(ie. punctuation) and believe me...I mean no offence by that. The idea for your story has me going...it is good!!! So, keep going and don't worry about those who don't review. They are just...what's the word I am looking for?...Ignorant? Anyhoo....keep going!!! Can't wait to read more!
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Title: ?
Reviewed By: some1 On: May 26, 2004 20:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is useless
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Reviewed By: shane (diablodude) On: May 26, 2004 16:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
this is such a good story. i have a idea but you may have used it in a chapter already but what do i know? my idea is a few days after kagome gets kidnapped by hojo(who sucks) inuyasha and kagome find a weird shaped bump in a trunk of a tree. as soon as kagome touches the bump a young kitsune ( shippo) falls to the ground and asks where he is and you get the picture...............................................damnit i forgot, i think you DID use that idea..........never mind.... just forget this review then.... like i said .......what do i know? plz R&R my stories, just look up my author name diablodude.
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Reviewed By: IYWriterGirl (not signed in) On: May 26, 2004 15:57 CDT
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Heya! You are really scary when you get mad! I'm sorry I didn't review the last chapter! I am sorry! I didn't have the time... although I have been betaing for you so i really don't have to apoligize... oh well.. Kyla
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Reviewed By: MissNikki On: May 26, 2004 10:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
not iternal it's enternal...and i have yet to find any other mistakes but this is one that sticks out right away.
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Title: inuyasha
Reviewed By: xxsparkle29xx On: May 06, 2004 16:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey i loved the story is inu goin to stay with kagome for the nite?......ummmmmm......well i waited a while for this fan fic to continue now im happy:) laterz ashley
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Reviewed By: ME On: May 01, 2004 15:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I agree that your spelling wasn't all that greet but I understand. I thought that your story was preety good, I enjoyed reading it. You should really finish this story.
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Title: hey hun
Reviewed By: cassandra v On: May 01, 2004 12:13 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
plz write more i want to know the rest!!!!!!
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Title: inuyasha
Reviewed By: xxsparkle29xx On: May 01, 2004 11:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey well please update the story i want to know what happened to inu and kagome ........heehee i guess i will have to wait like everyone else......g2g laterz ashley u can email me at: ashleytolmasoff@hotmail.com
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Reviewed By: IceDrake_5150 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2004 00:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good fic, pretty short chapters. I can't say too much, cause I haven't posted my first fic yet. I'm still working on the first few chapters :). Anyhow, update soon pls
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Title: inuyasha
Reviewed By: xxsparkle29xx On: April 29, 2004 21:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey here is the responce that u wanted hee hee whats going to happen next in the rain scene?.....mmmmmmmmmm.....i guess i am going to have 2 wait like everyone else.....;) hee hee well till next time laterz ashley p.s. u can email me at : ashleytolmasoff@hotmail.com got 2 go bye kay
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Title: inuyasha
Reviewed By: xxsparkle29xx On: April 29, 2004 21:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey here is the responce that u wanted hee hee whats going to happen next in the rain scene?.....mmmmmmmmmm.....i guess i am going to have 2 wait like everyone else.....;) hee hee well till next time laterz ashley p.s. u can email me at : ashleytolmasoff@hotmail.com got 2 go bye kay
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Reviewed By: IYWriterGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2004 15:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
i would be your beta.... i love the new chapter and i dont care if you call me kyla, it is my name...lol Kyla *smiles*
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Title: Hey Gurl
Reviewed By: She-Devil [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2004 20:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
You did great. I sorta like it. I mean its funny yet i still miss Inuyashas rudeness but its nice to have a change once in awhile. Its original alright. Im usually a real harsh reviewer but i liked it cuz i never thought about what would happen if kagome never fell through the well. I just thought that it wouldnt exist *Huh shows how creative i am* well i hope u update soon cuz i like the speedy relationship.....yet i miss the playin hard to get. :-P Well E-mail me its wildspiritfire19@yahoo.com c ya fellow Inuyasha sister.:-)
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