| "InuYasha a modern fairytail." Reviews/Comments [ 85 ] |
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Reviewed By: rav3n On: July 20, 2005 15:58 CDT
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i like this story, plz update on it, i know its been like forevevr since you did, i just wanna see what happens next. oh yeah, you should try to space things out after "."'s and such, and check your grammar (i know i'm not the best at it either and im in the tenth grade, lmao) so plz, plz, PLZ update again
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Title: Grammer Check
Reviewed By: Red Falcon On: January 09, 2005 14:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read through the first couple of lines and could barely get through it. You really need to work on your grammer. You don't space properly between "quoted phrases" and you also do not punctuate "im" into "I'm." Just because you are not writing for school doesn't mean you can let yourself get lazy. You have a great idea for a story. It's just hard to enjoy it when you have to wade through poor grammer to find the plot. If you like, try getting a beta reader to check for mistakes that you might not have seen. I would be happy to help. red_falcon0001@yahoo.com Don't worry though, my writing started out pretty rough, it can only improve if you are brave enough to put your work out there. I commend you for that!
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Title: what the @#$#
Reviewed By: inutrasha On: December 02, 2004 01:48 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Chapter 21, WHO THE H@#$ IS INPESONATING ME! oh and very nice work, again. well, thats all.
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Reviewed By: *angel*lights* On: November 03, 2004 01:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update!!!!!!!! wow! I totally enjoy this fic keep updating soon Inuyasha's a total sweetie!!! *sighs* I wish he was here!
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Reviewed By: Kyla ( You do know who I am right, Oceania?) On: October 30, 2004 14:37 CDT
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Loved it... if you think 7th grade sucks, you aren't going to like 8th grade (i hate it..)\ Kyla IYWriterGirl (The girl who hasn't had internet for nearly 2 weeks so she came over to her grandpa's...hehhe) just feel like using all the space!!!!
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Reviewed By: Row Row On: October 22, 2004 23:22 CDT
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UPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Oooooohhh,I just can't stop thinking of Inuyasha without a shirt on.Can you say,yuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuummmmmmmmmmmmmyyyyyyyyyy?!?!?!?!?!?!
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Reviewed By: Star Fire Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2004 17:17 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh I can't wait for the next chappie to go up! I really like this story so far so Ihope you update soon!ciao
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Title: so good!!
Reviewed By: inuyasha=#1 fan On: July 05, 2004 12:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was soooooo funning and cute!plz write more!i love to hear more!
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Reviewed By: Kyla (IYWriterGirl) On: June 18, 2004 02:16 CDT
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I am getting the start of a bad sickness... and i can't sleep. I apoligize for repeationg this in a review but you'd probably read the review first. I have to go... for lack of a better word... puke.. i hate sickness...
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: Gelvin On: June 14, 2004 00:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLease you have to update soon I love it, Sigh I must know what happens. I will reas again once up dated
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Reviewed By: Kyla (IYWriterGirl) [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2004 20:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
Well.. aren't people supposed to review? Lol. It's okay... I can't beta this cahpter right now anyway..
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Reviewed By: angeldemon45678 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2004 14:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. I see nothing wrong with it at all. It's absolutely fabulous. Can't wait to read more. It's so totally awesome.Inu-Yasha is so sweet here! I love how you left some characters the same and changed some. You changed them to fit perfectly into your story! Please write more! I'm very hyper right now!
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Reviewed By: IYWriterGirl(not signed in) On: May 31, 2004 22:04 CDT
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i read ALL your reviews for Fiery Skies.. we are starting to sound like each others rabid fan girls (not in the sick way either) Kyla
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Reviewed By: Hikaru1617 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2004 01:37 CDT
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Glad you've made a comeback, and you seem to be happy again as well. Well, I guess that now that I've said that, I like the way your story is going, so keep it up!!!
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Reviewed By: diablodude again On: May 30, 2004 23:30 CDT
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i have a qwestion. can you plz put my two characters in the story? my characters are diablodude (me) and he looks like : black armour like koga's,pointed ears like sesshomaru, red crescent moon on fore head, black hair like inuyasha's human form, brown eyes,muscular,and a blck tail. the second character is nukimsu, diablodudes mate and she looks like : black pointed dog ears with white tips, a golden star on her fore head, blue eyes, her armour is made from the shadow rat (like fire rate but black), filled out in certain places, goldy blond hair, uses shadow sword( a sword that can take any shape but she preferrs the kattanna look and it will cut through anything). both my characters are full demon but i just described their human look and they both work for naraku and can travel through shadows. diablodude has a sword as well called tantosaiga (sucky name but works for me) and with each battle its color changes from steel all the way to black, the strongest of all colors/shade. my characters are bth made up. diablodude.
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