| "InuYasha a modern fairytail." Reviews/Comments [ 85 ] |
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Reviewed By: IYWriterGirl (not signed in cuz it won't let me) [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2004 16:02 CDT
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I love the new chapter! Arigato for the chapter dedication! Kyla (IYWriterGirl)
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Reviewed By: IYWriterGirl (not signed in) On: April 16, 2004 21:43 CDT
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luv the new chapter. don't worry you didnt lose a reviewer.. Kyla
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Reviewed By: IYWriterGirl (not signed in) On: April 16, 2004 16:09 CDT
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i'm sorry about that! i didn't mean to brag. i just didn't think about it being offensive to you b4 i wrote it! sry again. Kyla
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Reviewed By: Monicheb On: April 16, 2004 07:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can say that this story is really good, but your grammar and spelling... I`ve just been learning English for 4 years and I`m able to find mistakes in your story. The story would be even better if you would use diffrent structures in your sentences. "Die Geschichte rockt die Scheiße weg" I LOVE YOUR STORY!!! UPDATE!!!
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Reviewed By: seizetsu ban-ga-ru [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2004 06:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
tehe!i love this fanfic!you rock!
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Reviewed By: kylam On: April 15, 2004 18:53 CDT
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im 2 lazy to type iywritergirl again...you're only twelve and me im 13.. hehe
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Reviewed By: IYWriterGirl (not signed in) On: April 15, 2004 18:52 CDT
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luv it1 yes i am a girl. 1st time i wrotethat i spelt gril.. lol Kyla
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Reviewed By: vampire_pandora [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2004 16:05 CDT
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Yes hello, i was very upset because i got to this chapter and there was no more. Now i am stuck wondering. WONDERING. i'll never sleep i have to know. please write more my life is at stake. all kidding aside this is a great story.
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Title: spring break
Reviewed By: Votuse On: April 15, 2004 04:37 CDT
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ITS SPRING BREAK DAMN RIGHT IM LAZY!!! (i dont have to practice with sword unless i want to .....witch is most of the time) when im not reading
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Title: short
Reviewed By: Votuse On: April 15, 2004 04:07 CDT
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HEY ITS TOO SHORT!!!! (i know i'm an ass haha) WRITE MORE NOW FOR MY ENTERTAINMENT! Did it work are you in fear and will write 24/7 yet?
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Title: Great work!
Reviewed By: inutrasha On: April 15, 2004 03:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I thought that was a very good story and the only reason spell & gramm were only 6 is spell check so thats understandable. Overall I'd say that this is a terific story and I encourage you to write, I'm not pushing you, but its getting very intresting and I'd like to read more of this fic.
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Reviewed By: MwAhAhA On: April 14, 2004 17:30 CDT
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Hi...nice fanfic ^.^ Continue plzzz
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Title: great story
Reviewed By: Votuse On: April 13, 2004 19:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
yeh great story
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Reviewed By: alexredf On: April 13, 2004 11:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hi i luv the fic my email is demonskater728@aol.com
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Reviewed By: QueenKagome [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2004 01:54 CDT
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i luve yur fanfic sooooo much!! contact me at little_ballerina2003@hotmail.com
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