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 Title: Behind Blue Eyes chap10
Reviewed By: Sailor Sayuri [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 21, 2005 08:34 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
This fanfic is great! I always liked angst fanfics where Heero is sad because of Duo, and the fact that there is a child in it, only adds more possibilities for the story! I absolutely want to read the next chapter, 'cause I think it'll be sad and disappointing not to end this story... T_T So PLEASE wright the next chapter! Onegai!!! T_T
 Title: EXCELLENT!!!!
Reviewed By: crazeme [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 06, 2005 10:51 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
You just keep on surprizing me. Hilde, a psyco-bitch, it fits her perfectly. Never did care much for the girl, she always seem a bit possessive in a Relena sorta way. But maybe that's just my perception. Wonderful chapter. Please update soon. I'm on the edge of my seat in anticipation.
 Title: Hey
Reviewed By: Angels tears [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 08, 2005 09:55 CST
Comment/Review:
I like the pounch. but poor cam, he still haves to be around that female. p.s. this is lil sesshomarus girl sry I lost my password but when I regain it u have a post for that one too.
 Reviewed By: shi_tenshiG12 [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 01, 2005 22:55 CST
Comment/Review:
Yay an update! Okay just to let you know I changed my name a little and registered too but I'm still the same shi-tenshi. anyways gotta say I love what you did to the (and I love this name for her) she-devil in this chapter. Though poor Cameron having to live with that abuse for so long. At least when the hottest couple in Gundam Wing (2X1! 2X1!) get together he'll have a much better life (The perfect couple in Gundam Wing would be 3x4). I hope you update soon and get Heero and Duo back together soon too. Well gotta go. Ja ne.
 Title: Woo Hoo!
Reviewed By: fujinakaheero [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 01, 2005 16:05 CST
Comment/Review:
Heylo Heylo! How are you? I'm good, alittle bored of the essay I'm writing right now but that is just me. Anyways, I'm so glad to see the new chapter up ^.^ You know I love your stories right? I think I've told you this quite a few times already in previous reviews but oh well I am saying it again. I'm so happy though, you finally updated again and you'll be updating again soon hopefully. As for my update that may take some time for school is becoming quite a bit for me, I may be getting a new chapter up sometime soon though, I may even be able to write it this weekend since I'm home all weekend with nothing to do.. besides look for a job lol. Anyways, I shall now do my happy dance because one of my favorite authors finally updated *does her hib bump, happy dance* anyways, I must go and finish my english essay, so until next time, Ja Ne! Love: Fujinakaheero. I'll be seeing ya again soon, I hope. ^.^
 Reviewed By: Jade1154 [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 31, 2005 22:17 CST
Comment/Review:
YES! your still doing great! i hope duo wont have problems with the police for hitting hilde, it was obviosly nesesary. i love protectev Duo and Hee-chan, its so cute!! well i cant wait too see your next update no matter how long i have too wait, there worth it!! **Himiko**
 Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 31, 2005 06:57 CST
Comment/Review:
O,O *blinks at new chap* YAY! *glomps you* now that i've had this to read.....udpate again!! why the hell is the uber-biatch here? *shoots hilde in her toe* abusing a little kid....*grumbles about getting a machete* gonna have to do something about her......AND SHE JUMPED ON HEERO!!! *SHOOTS HILDE IN HER BIG TOE AND GLARES*
 Title: Behind Blue Eyes
Reviewed By: anissa [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 30, 2005 23:58 CST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hey, there. So glad to see that this story has nbeen updated! You are right though Hilde really is a she-devil! My goodness! I couldn't believe the things that she was saying and doing and then she had the nerve to attack Heero in order to get to her son. I'm glad someone took this situation in hand before it got even more out of control than it was. I'm glad Heero was there to protect and soothe Cameron from his mom, but I really had no idea of the damage that Hilde had been inflicting on their son. Well, now that she has been arrested I know that this is by no means over so I simply can't wait to read more so please post again soon. Nice chapter!
 Reviewed By: shi-tenshi  On: October 04, 2005 08:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
FINALLY! Yay you updated! poor Heero. I do feel sorry for him right now, all that guilt and regret can't be good for a guy. plus Duo had the nerve to ask him why it would matter that when Quatre and Trowa came to visit they brought him. I mean at that moment I thought 'Duo you really are the baka Heero always said you were! I mean COME ON you're his ex AND he obviously still loves you. moron.' tch. Well I hope he gets his act together soon and gets back together with his true love (Heero NOT Hilde XP). Well anyways hope you update soon. ja ne. p.s. wtf? why is the bitch back in the story? you've got some major explaining to do and make it fast.
 Reviewed By: Astrael  On: September 26, 2005 18:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
What a horrible thing to do! Cliffies! Ugh. Anywho, I love the story, love the writing, and totally love it in general. Cool.
 Reviewed By: demonsbaby69777  On: September 24, 2005 14:57 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I hope you write more really soon. I think this fic is great so far.
 Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 23, 2005 11:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE NOOOOOOWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!::FAINTS FROM NOT CONSTANT WAIL::....::HOLDS UP 10+ SIGN::
 Title: HEY!!!!
Reviewed By: fujinakaheero (not signed in)  On: September 23, 2005 06:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ohayo! You finally updated one of your sories, I am very greatful that you did, you know I love your stories and I have been waiting.. not to patiently but I've been waiting to see an email in my inbox telling me you updated one of you stories. Thank you for the review on fanfiction, I am trying to get the next chapter to Solitude up though I am still typing it and revising the copy I wrote in my writing book. But Thank you for the review, I like seeing things like that from authors I respect. Anyways such good stuff, as expected and I do hope you will be updating another one soon.. personally I'd said you should update the one with Heero and Duo being princes and such, that's a personal fav of mine.. ok well I love all of your stories. Anyways until next time Ja Ne! Fujinakaheero *much love and huggles* ^.^
 Title: behind blue eyes
Reviewed By: anissa [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 23, 2005 01:54 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hi. I just had a chance to read this story and I must say that I was pleasantly surprised. This is a really good story and I really like Duo's son Cameron. He is really such a sweetheart. Hilde by the way is terrible! I can't believe that she became so bitter and cruel! As for Duo he has turned out to be a complete jerk when it comes to Heero, but he is great with his son and the rest of the pilots. In a way I wish that Heero could have found someone else to love and to heal with, but that doesn't look like that will be the case. I also really like Sally in this story. She has such a warm and nurturing presence. She has really been there for Heero and I'm sure that Heero ultimatley appreciates it even though he just recently acted like a jerk to her and his fellow pilots. At least he apologized for his behavior and tried to make ammends with Cameron and the others. I think that therapy was a very good idea for both Heero and Cameron. This will be way for them to vent and to explore their feelings about things that they have been keeping inside. Now Hilde actually had the nerve to show up at Sally and Wufei's home! I can't wait to read the next chapter of this and see what happens. Very nice story!
 Reviewed By: Jade1154 [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 22, 2005 22:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
AHHHHHHH!!! you so bad! leaving it there like that!! this was a wonderfull chapter!! i cant wait for more updates!!!
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