| "Cruel Deception" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Title: GREAT!!
Reviewed By: Kuroi to Hikaro On: March 28, 2004 12:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hikari: Wonderfull!! ^.^ This was so much fun to read!! Kuroi: *nods* Yeah. I don't like het at all and Hiei/Kurama is my all time favorite pairing, yet I like your story. Hikari: And, NO! We are NOT being sarcastic. People tend to think we're being sarcastic alot. Kuroi: *snorts* That's cuz there just dumb. Hikari: Anyway, keep up the good work! Kuroi: We'll be waiting for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Drof Tceferp [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2004 19:45 CST
Comment/Review:
BOTAN IS EVIL!!! ....Cool! I like this Botan! ^_^ I KNEW she was really evil and malicious on the inside!!! UPDATE SOON DUDE!!!
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Reviewed By: Demonand Goddess(not logged in) [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2004 15:12 CST
Comment/Review:
You MUST make this a hiei/kuruma! They belong together! Anyway, this is really interesting, so update soon!
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Reviewed By: Koritsune Dragonrider [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2004 14:21 CST
Comment/Review:
Okay, I'm a hieixkurama fan too and you better end it that way!you can have Hiei explain to Kurama what happened and hook Yusuke with Botan. Sound like a story? Just an idea! Great chappy!
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Reviewed By: yyh4evah!! On: March 21, 2004 12:59 CST
Comment/Review:
dude, u suck. i luv yaoi, but u just butchered it with this lame story
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Reviewed By: inumoon3 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2004 11:29 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is weird but intresting!!! But hurry up and update the Violinist and the Prince that's my favorite story right now!!!
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Reviewed By: Koritsune Dragonrider [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2004 20:45 CST
Comment/Review:
Ummmm, Hiei and Kurama are going to stay together right? I'm not saying it's a bad story but it's just doesn't seem right to me. Anyway please keep writing!
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