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Reviewed By: priscel *sighs* On: July 14, 2004 15:42 CDT
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Ya!! good thing Duo kept his mouth shut to wait for the token straight guy *snickers* man I think the spiel that the Horde had instructed Heero with to woo prince Duo contain atleast four songs lol and dang is heero adorable when he is confused. so is it really a monthly undating routine *sniffles, eyes slowly enlarge to puppy glare and pouts* I guess I'll have to weight a long while huh? *sniffs*
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Reviewed By: pyrzm [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2004 08:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the Quatre rebellion here, and the hot 03x04 attempts at action. If Quatre acted the way he does in the majority of fics written about him, at least the lemony sort, he wouldn'thave lasted five minutes into the war. Too funny, as always! And glad to see you're prolonging our agony with a well timed plot twist. I suspected Duo is more than a match for Treize, though. Heero to the rescue, at last?
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Title: Ch 12
Reviewed By: justkat [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2004 04:34 CDT
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Whoops! My son just said that I've downgraded her from a square (well that figures!) to a line. And he's right. (Damn!! I hate that!) But she's still pink...
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Title: CH 12
Reviewed By: justkat [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2004 04:29 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh no!!! Evil, evil 1-dimensional Relena! (Sorry...I've downgraded her from a line to a spot. A very smallspot. But it is pink...)When oh when will Heero and his not-Princess ever make it back to the men's room? I shall s-p-r-e-a-d my fingers (with my eyes closed and the lights off)...across the keyboard in anxious anticipation (and silent support for Trowa and his Little One.) More. Please!!!^^
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Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2004 23:12 CDT
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After only one mistake, I've learned that I can only read this fic at home. You really need warnings at the beginning of every chapter stating that the reader can explode into sudden bursts of raucous laughter. Chapter 12 was actually painful! You did such a fantastic job at playing up the subtle "coincidences" of the show; it reminded me so much of "Thumb Wars" (if you haven't seen it, check it out!) Poor Quatre and Trowa - will they ever get a moment's peace? I absolutely love how Heero refers to Duo as the "not-princess." And don't even get me started on the whole gun thing! This is an amazingly brilliant piece of comedy so far. I haven't seen anything like it yet; nor have I laughed so hard, so often.
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Reviewed By: Kallie On: July 01, 2004 20:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE it! I read this fic a while ago and I thought it ended with the mission reports (funny!), I just have to keep reading it again and again. I was skimming the stories and noticed that there was a new description in the summary and dove right back in. Please, please, PLEASE let there be more! By the way, the kissin' in the bathroom... very hot. May the muses guide you.
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Reviewed By: Yanagi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2004 14:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic. I laughed so hard I've got a belly ache. Please write more soon.
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2004 12:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
(sniffs) please update *uses cherub duo with best puppy dog eyes*
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Reviewed By: tingel On: June 24, 2004 05:45 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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*Aaargh* I'm still recovering! This is the funniest story I've come across so far! THANK YOU SO MUCH!!! I read all 10 chapters now. Was practically glued to the screen and wiping tears of laughter from my eyes the whole time. Please tell me you're still working on the fic and that there'll be more soon! You'd have my undying love!
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Reviewed By: White Destiny [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2004 16:41 CDT
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Gosh, if I were Heero, I would've killed Duo a LONG time ago! Oh my gosh, to walk back to the castle, that would take so long! I probably would have committed suicide! But, Heero, being Heero, he HAS to accomplish his mission, lol! And I wonder when the lemon scene comes! Must read on! :D
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Reviewed By: White Destiny [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2004 15:18 CDT
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Heero, Heero... Lol! Your butt is absolutely to DIE for! Oh and I can't wait until the actual 1x2 action comes into play! :D~~~ So... I must read! ^_^
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Reviewed By: White Destiny [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2004 14:36 CDT
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Bwuhaha, I absolutely ADORE this fic! But... how can no one notice how HOT and SEXY Heero is?!? Or how beautiful Duo is... *sighs* Must read next chapters... heh... :D
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Reviewed By: White Destiny [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2004 13:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lol, I've only read the Prologue and I already give you ratings! I believe that you are one of the ONLY people who can make the Disclaimer and Notes FUN to read! I was drinking my tea... shut up, lol, and your Prologue was threatening me to do a spit-take! I swear!!! Geez, if your disclaimer's that funny... I wonder how funny the REST of your story is, lol! Well, I think I'm gonna go ahead and read it now! And strong Heero's tickle my fancy! ^_^
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Title: Sevun
Reviewed By: sevun [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2004 18:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pool boy?" Heero was rather proud of his steady, calm tone."You're growling again, Heero," Duo sighed. "He had a nice cock and he was kinda ticklish. He was cute."Heero's eyes narrowed. "Where can I find this pool boy?" "He lives in--wait a minute. Why do you want to find the pool boy?" *rolls around floor laughing her brains to mush* that actually brought tears to my eyes :) Ahh the joy of a possessive, jealous, homicidal, adorable Heero. I hope you continue soon *begs like a puppy* and kill of the horde too..bad banshees :)
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Title: ch.11
Reviewed By: Jahrom On: June 05, 2004 02:47 CDT
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?! ...!!! !! .... ??? ?
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