| "Andy and Mai" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Title: One Word....WOW
Reviewed By: Crimson Edge [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2006 07:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
10's across the board!! I feel so wrong reading this , but still I MUST READ MORE!!!!!
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Reviewed By: me On: April 16, 2005 14:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
dragon balls? imean realy couldnt you have thought of a better way any way i loved the lemon and the story and you kept them verry in character even thought the dragon ball the is a little weird i do want you to continue it i would realy like to see terry and sulia back to gether terry is my #1 favorite after all and hes a gourus hunk and i love sulia terry lemons so dont stop
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Reviewed By: Dark Moon Queen On: February 10, 2005 11:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a really good fic its so hard to fatal fury ones. this is a continuation fic right :)
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Reviewed By: Lynks a.k.a LiL Elf On: July 11, 2004 22:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love this! Are u goin to write more of it? I hope so! Please email me if u are :) LiL Elf tommy_daidouji@yahoo.com
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Title: WOO HOO!
Reviewed By: Severina [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2004 01:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Has anyone ever written a better first sentance? I think not! There is a reason you are the queen of lemons honey, and you did it again! God that was awesome! I love the idea of her going to be naughty outside! That was deliciously HOT! WOO HOO! Oh, i have to read more! :)
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