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Reviewed By: Miko no Suteki [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2004 15:22 CDT
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yay! nice updates, poor little girl. you know i was under the impression that Jyakotsu was a girl. the jap subtitles call him a guy and stuff, but they do that even to kagome, its a translation error. (even found in the manga. like when sess is fighting inu in one chapter, he keeps saying stuff like "that stupid guy!" and crap like that, its pretty annoying) its a lot funnier if she was a guy though, haha, poor inu-chan. im not flamming your 'mistakes' or anything, just thought id bring it up. anyways, loved the last couple chapters, keep it up! ;) ~*~*~*~*~*SUTEKI~*~*~*~*~*~
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: May 02, 2004 18:28 CDT
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Excellent chapter! I do have to point out though I would read with or without the cliffhangers...but then again I'm just odd, my friends see, to think so. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: ME On: May 02, 2004 12:53 CDT
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Dun, dun, dun, dun!!!! it's Shiori, isn't it?? Souta is a trip ^_^ great chapter--await yout next!!! ja!
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Reviewed By: inu fan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2004 18:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
so good. must...have....more...NOW!!!!! please
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Reviewed By: MIztikal_Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2004 13:37 CDT
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I know who the kid is!!! i've seen that one episode! muhahahz i feel so smart! well i loved it so far and i hope that you update Krystal.
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Title: ahhh
Reviewed By: hollow angel (not signed in) On: May 01, 2004 02:58 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
whats ganna happen?? oHH NOO inu cant kill shiori...i think thats who ur talkin bout..am i right? anyways...yeah..he'll prolley find anoother way around it:) i love ur fic!! its got me soo into it..im like...glued whenever i read it. It is very different..but not as different as mine!! im writing the chapter now where the plot thickens and twists a 180 lol...anyways..great job!! keep it comming!
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: April 30, 2004 21:44 CDT
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Excellent chapter! The moment with Kagome thinking Shippo was agirl was great! Looking forwards to the next chapter! Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: MIztikal_Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2004 01:54 CDT
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Lol i spelled my name wrong. Go figure. I hope rin's okay and that they all kick Naraku's ass, unless. *eyes u carefully* Kikyo isn't actually dead or was and Naraku brought her back to foil any plans that Inuyasha and co. have set against the dark hanyou. oo im giving away the good stuff. lol jk well yeah uhm.. i have to go learn how to spell the simple things. lmao. Krystal.
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Reviewed By: MIztikal_Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2004 01:52 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GO souta, i am finally reading a fanfic that actually gives him something other than a few lines and shows up here and there, though i do do it myself *whistles innocently* well please keep up the good work and update asap. krsytal.
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Reviewed By: Soph On: April 28, 2004 20:24 CDT
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i LOVE the last line ... that was GREAT! hope you update soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: April 28, 2004 17:41 CDT
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Another excellent chapter! Don't really know what to say. Like Mirokus gesture with the card. Suprised Kouga didn't say more about the loss of his mark. Sesshi really need to get some deosn't he? Till next time good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: Miztikal_Dragon (not signed in) On: April 27, 2004 01:57 CDT
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holy crap! poor everyone. you're making me frustrated. lol keep up the good work and update asap i love it so far. Krystal.
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Title: yayy
Reviewed By: hollow angel (not signed in) On: April 26, 2004 22:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i have reviewed a lot of people's fics..so for once...i have run out of words...either that or u left me speechless...either one of the answers above is good on ur part...u r in my favs
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Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2004 19:44 CDT
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Fascinating chapter. Is it true about the monkeys? Could you please put a row of asterisks bewteen the paragraphs when the scene changes? My breath is bated.
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Reviewed By: Joyous PA [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2004 18:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent chapter, I can't wait to read more. Umm.. I read a review that said they may be falling in love to fast.. The way I see it is, if it's true love, it's never to fast.
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