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Reviewed By: Elayne (won't let me sign in) [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2004 21:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the most original fanfics I've ever had the pleasure of reading. I believe you'll be seeing a lot more reviews in the near future, but for now I just wanted to let you know how much I liked it. I love the way you protray Inuyasha. I think it's very true to the Anime. I hope you have another plot twist coming up soon though, because with most of it now just being relationship developement it's turning into just another "Inuyahsa can't express his feelings and Kagome kicks butt" kind of fic, which is not what I think you want it to be. You have a very nice writing style, especially on the action parts. I always knew what was happening and never got confused. My advice would be to stick to your strengths and try to keep this story original. Also, and this one you seem to be doing just fine so far, write for yourself. Yes, reviews are wonderful, but they're not all that matter. I like to give writers a push in the right direction every now and then, especially if they're doing something really well, or if they feel like they want to give up. But, while I hope that they read and follow my review, I hope they can learn to write for the simple joy of writing. So they can look back at it afterwards and say "I love this story."
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Reviewed By: Liwah_Lee [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2004 18:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! THis is one of the best fan fics I've ever read! :D Possibly even the best overall! All the characters are well developed although I personally Sesshy rocks the most ^.~ Write more soon!!
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Reviewed By: Nagasaki [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2004 17:33 CST
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that was a great chapter! i can't wait until your next chapter!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: heninu111 On: April 03, 2004 07:59 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
an amazing story keep up the good work and update soon.
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Reviewed By: RedHerring [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2004 07:29 CST
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Nice! Ane you're updating alot too!
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Reviewed By: Inu13 On: April 02, 2004 18:48 CST
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WOW! Great story! It has everything a good story should have. Comedy, romance, action and of course hentai. Keep on writing and update soon! Ja Ne ^_^
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Reviewed By: RedHerring [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2004 17:21 CST
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Yay!! I love this story! I can't wait for the next chapter. ////////PS- Use dividers when switching scenes, the abrupt jump is confusing sometimes.
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Reviewed By: ArtemisMoon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2004 14:57 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I LOVE this story! You've done a wonderful job with it so far! I can't imagine what possessed you to post so many chapters in one day, but you won't hear me complaining, lol...if you continue to post like that, then you just made a new best friend. ^_~ Anyway, the story really is very good and I can promise you that I will be back to read more. Just the fact that I am bothering to review attests to that fact. I am notorious for reviewing almost everything I read on ff.net, but next to nothing on mm.org. I have to really like a story for me to go out of my way to review on here...and believe me, I wasn't planning on leaving without reviewing and 'ecouraging' you to write more! So do you except compliments, threats, bribes, or just all out begging? LOL
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Reviewed By: Zelix [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2004 14:50 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NO!! NO CLIFFIES!! The fic is great though.
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Reviewed By: Mysterious AM On: April 02, 2004 09:41 CST
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Cruel, cruel! Uploading several chapters of a really good new story and leaving it at a cliffhanger like that! *sighs* Well, hopefully you will upload many more chapters soon, right? ^_^ This really is a very good story so far and it has certainly captured my attention. I normally don't care for stories that have any real focus on Sesshoumaru and Rin, but even those parts kept me reading without resorting to skimming. Please update again soon!
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Reviewed By: MintlovesSR [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2004 04:06 CST
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Too Great! More Sess/Rin!!! Plzzzzzzz!!! Damn kagura. Make her die in MUCH pain!!!!!!! Sess/Rin are the BEST!
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Reviewed By: Laura-chan (too lazy to login) On: April 02, 2004 02:33 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Woe, great fanfiction! It's one of the best around here! Please, keep writing ^_~
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Reviewed By: Miko no Suteki [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2004 01:36 CST
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ahh! PLEASE UPDATE!!! i loved it! i loved the whole inu and kag moment, and the 'submissive' thing with sesshy and rin.
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Reviewed By: Zero Saotome On: April 02, 2004 01:06 CST
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Wow, this is a REALLY good fic. Please, PLEASE, write more soon.
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Reviewed By: ME On: April 02, 2004 00:09 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god!! awesome story--just love it!! I'm so glad you gave us several chapters to start off with--really gets you into the fic and makes you crave for more!! So Inu's found his mate and Sesshie's powers are coming back--now on to the really good stuff--hope Naraku and Kagura really get it good--a nice disgustingly painful death would be appropriate, I think ^_^ please update soon--can't wait!! ja ne!!
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