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Reviewed By: Silver Moon Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2004 23:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
§¤ This is an awsum fic! Lol I feel so bad for Kikyo though... So Rin can use tenseiga? KEWL I wonder why... ;)
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Title: 54
Reviewed By: Hououza On: May 20, 2004 16:27 CDT
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I think the phrase here is short but sweet...that was an excellent chapter. It layed the ground work for a few things and continues to build the tense atmosphere. Look forwards to the next one, I can agree writing multiple ones at once is a huge pain, I have four on the go at the moment...also can relate to the having to reread your own work. Half the time I end up rereading the last chapter so I don't repeat myself. Teaser would be good, look forwards to it. Till next time good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: MIztikal_Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2004 05:27 CDT
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YAY! i feel so loved. te he, well that was a great chapter. Nice spin on the whole Inuyasha being pinned to the tree. I have my own idea for a twist, but shhhh..no one must know.. lol well please keep up the good work and update asap. I would have reviewed sooner if my computer actually liked me for once. I love your story...OOO and i'm totally willing to take either Sesshomaru or Inuyasha off your hands once your finished...*grins evilly* but Sesshy rocks!!! Update asap. i'll be waiting... Krystal.
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Reviewed By: Miztikal_Dragon *not signed in* On: May 18, 2004 23:06 CDT
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hey, that was good, its a strange new twist and i love it to death. Dammit kikyo why does she have to screw everything up, atleast she's dead...or is she? lol well please keep up the good work and update asap. Krystal.
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: May 18, 2004 17:37 CDT
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First things first allow me to say congratulations on your thesis. Oh, one more thing...I agree completely with Inuyasha's sentiment. Actually being told when doing something wrong would be a great help... Excellent pair of chapters. Not sure what Kagome is going to do but I look forwards to finding out. Kouga is...um...well you know. I wonder if he still has a chance with Ayame? That is if he grovels enough... Look forwards to the next one when you get time. Good luck with everything! Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2004 06:01 CDT
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Very enjoyable. As I mentioned in an earlier review, I really like the way you manage to include canon; even if it is AU, it is all still destined.
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Title: UPDATE
Reviewed By: Votuse On: May 12, 2004 16:00 CDT
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HEY UPDATE!!!!! plz............................ i like fic..................... ok back to anger managment classes again
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Reviewed By: MIztikal_Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2004 23:49 CDT
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LOl he walked right into a wall. that's funny. please update asap. this is just to much, poor sesshomaru. I hope he's not really dead because that would be tooo sad. i think i can't stop crying. mixed emotions isn't good for wierdos, we get confused. Please please keep up the good work. I'll be waiting. *stalker music pops up in the background* lol Krystal.
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Reviewed By: Miko no Suteki (not in the club) On: May 08, 2004 22:55 CDT
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LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL, that was FREAKING HILLARIOUS! lol, i made my dad read it...it doesnt sound as funny when i read it aloud i realized. anyways, NOOOOOOO SESSHIE-SAMA! nononono! come back! ::grrr:: never liked kanna all that much, reminds me of the children of the corn, lol. UPDATE SOON! ~*~*~*SUTEKI~*~*~
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: May 08, 2004 17:36 CDT
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Excellent chapter once again! Some really good twists there! Look forwards to finding out what comes next, that is when you have some time, sorry. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: ME On: May 08, 2004 11:05 CDT
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Damn!! poor Sessh is dead??!! say it aint so!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!! okay, okay...Rin is going to use Tenseiga to revive him ^_^ and Inu and Kag are just so damn funny!!! LOVE those two together!!!! update soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: May 07, 2004 19:33 CDT
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Excellent chapter! Looks like Kouga is a bit...um...can't think of a way to put it without using a profanity. Look forwards to seeing if he can get himsekf out of this one! Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: Miko no Suteki (not logged on) On: May 07, 2004 02:09 CDT
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oh! and thanks for the clarification on jyakotsu, the anime made it really hard to tell. i havent gotten to them in the manga yet, so yeah. arigatou on the info! ~*~SUTEKI~*~
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Reviewed By: Miko no Suteki (not logged in) On: May 07, 2004 02:08 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good good good! stupid cheating kouga!!! i would rather her be with inu, but kougas supposed to be hopelessly in love with her then get left out in the cold! hehe,jk. it was good. i never really liked ayame...never seen her in an episode, but in all the stories shes a self-righteous bitch...sounds like kikyou, but more annoying. hehe ~*~*~SUTEKI~*~
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Reviewed By: Miztikal_Dragon *not signed in* On: May 07, 2004 00:13 CDT
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hey good job. whooooa that's some good stuff. please keep up the great work i can't wait till there's more. Krystal.
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