| "The Centre" Reviews/Comments [ 167 ] |
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Reviewed By: FaileDi7 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2004 17:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude, I love you. But if you don't update soon I'm going to have an anuerysm. lol - Hea-chan
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Reviewed By: MIztikal_Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2004 02:02 CDT
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ACK! evil cliffy! This chapter was great. please keep up the great work. I love this story and can't wait to find out what happens next! Krystal.
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Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2004 07:35 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Once again I am amazed at how you manage to mix the canon into your fights. This last chapter, with chunks from different parts of the timeline,worked really well for me.
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Reviewed By: YFate On: June 07, 2004 04:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am so glad you updated once again! I was checking every day to see if you had on aff.net and was so happy to find it here! I absolutely love your fic, and your take on the different anime characters/situations. Rin's "Pizza" line was priceless, and I'm waited with bated breath for the next chappie---so hurry to your mom's to update, as I'm turning blue and my eyes are already starting to pop out of my head! Ten Stars!
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Reviewed By: Silvering [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2004 20:26 CDT
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Yikes, sounds like a murderous schedule! Kudos for the cliffhanger... I know it has to be good when it makes me get supremely irritated and impatient for the next chapter! ;)
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: June 06, 2004 17:55 CDT
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Absolutely excellent chapter! Be interesting to see how all the pieces come together... Don't worry about the updates, hope the changes to your computer work out ok. Till next time good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: Votuse On: June 03, 2004 04:24 CDT
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HEY UPDATE NOW!!!!!!! ITS BEEN 12 DAYS.......i think plz its my fav fic unless your taking a vacation to make better chapters then by all means take one but........you don't need one write!!!NOW!!! Your Tormentor, Votuse :) (i need to copy write that)
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Reviewed By: Stokley On: June 02, 2004 12:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story! Cant wait for an update. i really like the way you out everything together. One of the best stories ive read. UPDATE!
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Reviewed By: Brennen_Sie_Drachen [not loged in] On: May 29, 2004 20:58 CDT
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GAH!! Evil evil clify!!! Must write more soon!!!!! Please update!!
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Reviewed By: Votuse On: May 26, 2004 23:34 CDT
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hey your doing awsome on the centre fic UPDATE!! heh heh sorry i hate cliffies :) ok well um..... don't start writing another fic till centre i done K?????????????????? OK Your Tormentor Votuse! :)
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Title: Yo Girlie
Reviewed By: Triss On: May 24, 2004 22:20 CDT
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As always my dear you do wonderful and I look forward to the update. A certain week is going well I hope!! Hugs, A
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Title: SORRY
Reviewed By: Silver Moon Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2004 23:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
§¤ Sorry about my 1st review... My computer was screwing up on me... so yeah Update soon! lol ¤§ §¤§ Silver Moon Dragon §¤§
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Title: Silver Moon Dragon
Reviewed By: Silver Moon Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2004 23:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
§¤ This is an awsum fic! Lol I feel so bad for Kikyo though... So Rin can use Tenseiga? KEWL I wonder why... ;) Lol I look forward to your next chapter! Hope to see it soon too! ¤§ §¤§ Silver Moon Dragon §¤§
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Reviewed By: Silver Moon Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2004 23:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
§¤ This is an awsum fic! Lol I feel so bad for Kikyo though... So Rin can use tenseiga? KEWL I wonder why... ;)
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Title: 54
Reviewed By: Hououza On: May 20, 2004 16:27 CDT
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I think the phrase here is short but sweet...that was an excellent chapter. It layed the ground work for a few things and continues to build the tense atmosphere. Look forwards to the next one, I can agree writing multiple ones at once is a huge pain, I have four on the go at the moment...also can relate to the having to reread your own work. Half the time I end up rereading the last chapter so I don't repeat myself. Teaser would be good, look forwards to it. Till next time good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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