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| "Power and Control" Reviews/Comments [ 44 ] | | Pages (3): [ 1 2 3 › » ] | Reviewed By: Glorious Eternal On: June 06, 2009 00:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice. I NEVER stop to read chapter'd fics, but this one caught my eye. I love it, keep up the good word
| Reviewed By: SoraLee On: November 07, 2008 14:47 CST
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I love this story to pieces, but I have to ask--is this going to end with Amon and Sakaki getting together? As much as I like Amon, I would be crushed if Michael and Sakaki broke up. Please continue soon!
| Title: Damn you are good
Reviewed By: Shiori Givens On: December 05, 2007 11:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fanfic. I just love that your main focus is not on Robin mainly, but she does still appear in the fic. PLEASE FINISH THIS FIC SOON!!!
| Reviewed By: hiya24 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2007 17:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one hell of an emotional roller-coaster. Parts of it almost made me want to stop reading, wanting to see Zeiran get what's coming to him is about the only thing that kept me going through those parts, that and the love you have portrayed in their relationship. I am kinda disappointed that I haven't seen more of Robin, but you've gotten enough comments about that so I just wanted to let you know. Past all that all I wanted to do was plead for an update, I really want those boys to be free and the only way that can happen is if you update =) Thanks for writing it, you have got talent and the fact that you have graced us with it makes me happy... =)
| Reviewed By: GeneWeiss [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2005 06:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Boy! took me a while to finish reading only to find out that it's still incomplete!!! Damn, this fic clearly makes Zeiran a physco villain! look at how he single-handedly took down three men, even Amon! How the bloody hell is poor Michael going to escape? I seriously hope that you made Zeiran pay BIG time for his hedious crimes. Perhaps, Amon should release his craft power and kill him horribly slow and painful! Will you involve Robin? Then, she can turn him into crispy toast! Hahahahahaha
| Reviewed By: Nicotine On: July 06, 2005 09:11 CDT
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sweet story honestly hot stuff you got going on here
| Reviewed By: Yawgmoth Messenger [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2005 18:00 CDT
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yes... more emotion... more angst... more damn waiting! WHY?! well, still good stuff with the cliffhangers (but im thinking people will spill blood or something if Zaizan doesnt get pwn3d) my guess is that robin shall be their saviour. damn, youve made Zaizan the most evil person. i mean, he is very secrative and likes to hurt his enemies bit by bit instead of one huge blow (at least thats how i interpreted his actions in the show). well, ill have to mention that youve twisted it in such a way that he's evil tenfold. me likes that. gangbangs and s&m parties? holy shit. i remember you mentioned someone other than Zaizan raping poor amon on a video, but it didnt occur to me Zaizan was some sort of pimp (which "magically" adds more evil persona) gawd, i would like to take him down. i did notice something, though. isnt it that all the hunters are either witches (robin, miho) or seeds themselves? i think that was suppose to be a requirement to even be able to use orbo. that was shown near the end when those factory guys, who are human, kept on going insane when using orbo. it seems to lack that effect on seeds and witches who use it. . so... does that mean there was a mistake in your story? am i bitching to much on a menial thing? or is it part of your originality? (in which case i should have shut up a while ago)oh, and ill guess again on your card: malachite talisman. or is it 3 strikes and im out? (hope i guessed right this time)
| Reviewed By: NA On: July 04, 2005 06:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I saw this fanfic before but never bothered to read it...no Amon, Robin pairing. -Laughs- So far, it's good but I have to say, I'm a little dissappointed (Am I even spelling that properly? It's 7:00am and I've been up all night so I'm not sure...heh.). I was hoping you wouldn't make Amon gay as well and even though I haven't yet read chapters 11 and 12, I can see, from scanning ahead a bit, that it would appear that he is. I, honestly, was hoping very much that Robin would be in this more, that she, too, would be there to comfort him. I feel, that while this is good, you left out the other characters so much that I wanted them back desperately...especially Robin. Oh well, not everyone is for them being together but I have to say, thinking about Amon being gay is disturbing...I have nothing against homosexuals, it's just that, he was with Touko and...it's Amon. -Whimpers and then starts to cry- I so wish he was with Robin...-Whimpers again- I have to go and read some other fanfics now to make me feel better...-Sticks tongue out- I read this on fanfic first but figured I wouldn't get the full impact of what your story is reading it there, thus my coming here...overall, good job...just not for the Robin/Amon people. He he...
| Reviewed By: amythestmage l.o. On: June 26, 2005 09:52 CDT
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I had forgotten about this story until just recently, and I am glad to know that it is still around (though it would seem that I hadn't missed but the last chapter). I am going to assume that the t.b.c at the bottom is a sign that this is a work in progress, so please do update if this story is still in progress. Thanks. -Amythestmage
| Reviewed By: Sophy On: June 26, 2005 04:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is absolutley wonderful, I've enjoyed reading it since I first found it some time last year. I've been waiting silently since the last chapter for another, and now I'm getting anxious. How can you just cut it off like that? Please update!
| Reviewed By: the Prince's Jewel On: February 26, 2005 21:50 CST
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*blinks* Ohhhh... hmm... some informative information is coming? Does not matter one way or another to me if there is any original storyline involved... *grumbles* I haven't gotten to see the show in forever, so fanfiction is now my only connection to it. *grin* Characters seem pretty much like I remember, though... I think I feel a bit sorry for Amon. Okay, more than a bit. It's a bitch talking about things you'd really rather not admit have ever, ever happened to you.
| Title: At ch. 9
Reviewed By: Pyrzm not signed in On: February 24, 2005 07:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story! You've really captured the characters well. The abuse of Amon was a suprise, but makes sense. Again, well handled. Very curious as to what Z. has over Amon! ^p Look forward to more. And a pox on FF.net. I could tell by some of the comments I'd seen that my own stuff was way to lemony for their taste. This is a much (/i>better venue, IMHO, except for the feedback gremlins.
| Reviewed By: Jesu On: February 05, 2005 15:04 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oy @_@ the wait for the next chapter is going to kill me. you're a master of cliffhangers. Zaizen is now my number 1 rated evil guy that deserves unmentionable terrors... poor Amoun...;_; i hope he gets some sort of comfort in the end... Keep up the fics!
pooY | Reviewed By: Kiba-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2005 12:37 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent fic :) I've never been too into WHR, but this is a great story!
| Reviewed By: dbalynne On: January 10, 2005 21:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I did enjoy your story looking forward to the other chapters. I would love to have your story on my site as well. www.writers-corner.net
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