| "Power and Control" Reviews/Comments [ 44 ] |
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Reviewed By: dbalynne On: January 10, 2005 21:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I did enjoy your story looking forward to the other chapters. I would love to have your story on my site as well. www.writers-corner.net
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Reviewed By: mika_jurgen [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2004 08:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow this is the greatest fanfic ever!!!! Sakaki and Michael are my two favourite characters and I really hope that you update sonn cause I really want to know what happens.
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Reviewed By: the Prince's Jewel On: November 21, 2004 22:19 CST
Comment/Review:
*bounces off walls in frustration* Severely sympathizing here with Sasaki... I'd've tried to take the bastard down too. *growls*
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Title: Oblivion of the Fire Sky
Reviewed By: Kaiya On: October 14, 2004 21:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
::waits for more fanfiction::
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Reviewed By: Kanno On: September 14, 2004 19:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Greetings, I found the story on FF.net (bullies they are, bootin' ya like that). I did it in an odd attempt to find something interesting after reading a comment about "infamous Michael and Zaizen fics". I love the story, never thought about yaoi in this anime, but there's got to be one yaoi fic for every anime, right? Keep up the good work and update soon, please.
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Title: -sits at your feet begging for more fanfiction-
Reviewed By: Burn the Doll (again) On: August 31, 2004 20:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I neeeeeeddd more... I want to know what happens next so I can dream about it and daydream about it all day.... woooohhhh.... You are by far the best fanfiction writer I know! I want to see some more Michael torture! -drools- Erm? Did I say that aloud? Oops ^_^; Oh well. Please write more! Here, a drink full of creative-ness, energy-ness, and all around good-ness to make you update sooner -hands you a Sprite- And if you don't like Sprite, well then... hmm... -hands you five dollars to get whichever drink helps you think the best- -Always going to read and reread your story until you update, Kayneko. (Ps-Sorry if I want you to update too soon, take your time because it's better if your not rushed or anything. I just want to encourage you to write so your fanfic will get finished and so it won't turn out like the ones that you read and enjoy just to find out that at the best cliffhanger they haven't updated in two years!!)
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Reviewed By: thePrincesJewel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2004 23:10 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
does "EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE" count as a review? I'm on the edge of my seat here! Amon's reaction to the hug was... hmm... heartwrenching? *tests that* Yeah. And all the good making up and then ugly old man... bletch! Now, let me just add this to favorites... You get a 9 for the ugly old man sex. That just... ick. If not for that... but then, there must be a bad guy...
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Title: I will do anything if you just continue!
Reviewed By: Burn_the_doll@yahoo.com On: August 02, 2004 01:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ohhhhhh noo!! You must update! I'll do ANYTHING. This is the BEST fanfic/story I have EVER read!! Please, I'm begging you! I NEED more! PLLLEEEAAASSEEEE!!! I'm desperate here! >_
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Title: I reveiwed before it was removed from FF.net
Reviewed By: SD On: July 07, 2004 11:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! Yes Amon needs a big hug. *Huggles him* So do Micheal and Sakaki *Huggles them* When one is electricuted through metal it usally leaves red marks similar to burns(speaking from experince). with Michaels shirt, you'd proubibly see those marks. Mabey some one does or mabey he wears a diffrentshirt and some one asks why. I think it'd be a good way to get someone else involved (mabey Robin?). Plz update soon! ~SD
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Title: Power and Control
Reviewed By: Yohji Aya and Amanda [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2004 13:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
I just finished what you have up for this fic and now I want more. Please post soon. I am reading.
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Reviewed By: Yohji Aya and Amanda [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2004 10:21 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW, what more is thee to say about this fic? It is utterly amazing! I just dont know what else to say, but i do know this is one of the best yet that i have read, and my first Witch Hunter Robin fic! fantasitc and i hope to see more of it! Amanda with my harem including Yohji and Aya of Weiß and Heero and Zechs of Gundam Wing
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Reviewed By: Sasuke89 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2004 14:35 CDT
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Ohh it would be so sweet if Robin could help comfort Amon. That is my fav. het couple in WHR. Please think about it. Sasuke:)
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Reviewed By: Zinou [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2004 03:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read/am reading this on AFF .. but couldn't leave a review because I wasn't registered there ... but I found this story posted here, and since I'm a reader, it's a mandatory I review .. yhea.. because I like this fic, yesss I do. Ok, firstoff.. I'm no lemon-hound, but I looove psychological trauma, which-- along with the obvious physical shizznat --absolutely abounds in this fic. Most fics involving sex are Nothing But, but this is one of those rare stories that have a plot included which actually dominates it. Nice. Your writing style is also pretty good, and the dialogue for the most part sounds natural. Everyone stays IC quite well, too. I always knew Zazien was a bastard ... and I infact wondered if he (or anyone else at the STN-J) abused Michael, because the possibility seemed so .. THERE. I've *always* hated Zazien, and this fic gives me a total reason to hate him even more, hurting my favorite characters.. *pokes poor Amon and Michael* Another thing that surprised me was someone else thought Michael/Sakaki was possible/probable. For awhile I was worried, but I'm better now.. XD *g* Rrrm .. yeesh. I think that's it. You gonna at any point detail at all just exactly how Amon was initially involved in this mess? Oh and do something horrible, HORRIBLE to Zazien at some point, neh? ;D
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Reviewed By: Yamistar On: May 17, 2004 16:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU R EVIL! EVIL EVIL EVIL EVIL EVIL! NOT SAKAKI! ANYBODY BUT HIM! PLEASE UPDATE AS SOON AS U CAN! *goes running off at a blind panic* ~Yamistar
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Reviewed By: Yamistar On: May 13, 2004 17:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
CHEATER! THAT MONSTER IS CHEATING! THERE HAS TO BE SOMEKINDA RULE FOR A RAPIST! THAT ISN'T FAIR! CHEATER CHEATER PUMKIN EATER! please update! I wanna see Zaizen get his ass kicked by Amon and Sakaki! Damn cheater! ~Yamistar
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