| "A Saiyan For All Seasons" Reviews/Comments [ 209 ] |
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Reviewed By: Snazzy On: August 28, 2004 15:44 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I forgive you for having this updated so late, cause again, it's a GREAT chapter and I absolutely LOVE this fic. But I hope you'll update sooner next time, or else I'll go crazy. btw, please never stop writing these incredible fics ^_^
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Reviewed By: dbz fan jess On: August 27, 2004 20:00 EDT
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great stuff... loved that chapter and I can't wait to read more... lovely lovely... I love your stuff... mad props... ja'ne
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Title: excellent
Reviewed By: vegeta1a On: August 27, 2004 00:36 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love this chapter. I liked it alot and was glad it was long. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2004 13:44 EDT
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have I told you lately that I love you? *hugs* This story is my favorite of all the ones I'm reading now (and I'm following quite a few!) Hard to say exactly what makes it so delightful--not just the sexual tension & dialogue exchanges, but this simple sense of authenticity...like there's no huge melodrama, just psychological nuance and believable relationship development. I'm so glad you updated!
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Title: ..
Reviewed By: indira On: August 26, 2004 12:33 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW, this is some really good stuff here! finally a REALISTIC B/V! I'm really impressed by the way you write...it's so detailed! I like it! I wish I could understand some more dificult words, then I would fully understand your story. (I'm dutch ^_^) anyway...I globally understand it all and I want to tell you that I'M ABSULUTELY ADDICTED to this story! now please write the next chapter fast cause my brain is hungry!
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Title: Er...I decide change my name a little
Reviewed By: Veglma, The Insane Wolf-jin On: August 26, 2004 01:43 EDT
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*Is drinking Lemonade*....Is it me or is it hot in here? Xiahou Fumi: Aye, it is hot, Hm...I wonder if you can cook a egg on the foor? Komachi Ayako:Hm...Vegeta is about to leave for space... Is Bulma going to find out that she has Vegeta's Kid? *snickers* I would pay five dollers to see her reation.
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Reviewed By: Veglma, A Insane Reader On: August 08, 2004 21:49 EDT
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I would have read the lemon but some butthead spuirt lemon juice at me!*Glare at Gohan, who smile back* Grr...I wonder how Bulma going to make Vegeta pay?
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Reviewed By: Veglma, A Insane Reader On: August 05, 2004 20:46 EDT
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Hm..At the end of chapter 5 I smell that a lemon is coming...*smell the air* Yup, a lemon.
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Reviewed By: Veglma, A Insane Reader On: August 05, 2004 19:05 EDT
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Vegeta, Bulma is not going to leave you alone. Oh, I wonder what she going to do?
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Reviewed By: diablos42069 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2004 06:15 EDT
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ok, not sure if i reviewed to this chapter yet, but that really doesn't matter. What matters is that I never felt so damn jelous in my life!LMAO! I mean GOD! Seriously, vegeta is like the fantisy of fantisies. And THAT, my friend, was fuckin fabulous way to put that fantisy into view hahahaha. in other words... GREAT LEMON!!! I think i need to take a shower now tho... feelin dirty HAHAHAHAHAHA update soon!!!! Arianna
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Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2004 23:00 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my!!! That was HOT! I loved it. Vegeta and his questions! ^__^ awesome. *is totally jealous*
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Title: About Last chapter
Reviewed By: Bulma/Storm On: May 30, 2004 19:44 EDT
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Excellent scene! Very well written! Great, Ember!
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Reviewed By: me On: May 29, 2004 18:24 EDT
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there is nothing wrong with writing a lemon scene. they are actually fun to me. *laughs nervously* but anways. Well hot dog! what exciting new developments are arising!!! WOOT!!!!
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Reviewed By: freaky-girl On: May 28, 2004 09:52 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow... That really was a lemon. But it was great, one of the best I've ever read!! Update soon!!
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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2004 23:55 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Girl, you have nothing to worry about when it comes to lemon scenes...trust me. You write the best lemon scenes I've ever had the priviledge of reading! I can't wait for you next chater, that one was amazing!!!
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