| "A Saiyan For All Seasons" Reviews/Comments [ 209 ] |
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Reviewed By: PrincessCrakALakin [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2005 23:40 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gah! You need to update! She can't get rid of baby Trunks! gl-i-ving... yeah. Please update?
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Reviewed By: dun dun dun On: April 01, 2005 20:12 EST
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gurl you have got to update! your chapters were excellent and the plots were...whoa! im hooked
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Reviewed By: fyrechylde [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2005 00:49 EST
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Oh Ember!!! This is breath-takingly beautiful!! I love the emotional roller coaster and the utter suspense!!! I love forward to more updates!
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Title: You Rock!!
Reviewed By: ghjk On: March 27, 2005 15:48 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh wow that was awesome cant wait for then next chapter. pls update as soon as you can. this has got 2 b one of d best BV get 2gethers out there. just excellent!!!!
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Reviewed By: Yeah! On: March 11, 2005 02:16 EST
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hey i really enjoyed this chapter. i don't mind Yamcha and Bulma kissing, i mean they WERE a copule once, just as long as they dont end up together ya feel. anywai, im glad u finally updated. damn i just wonder when Vegeta is coming back and when Bulma is finally gonna fall for him hehe. pls update when u can. this is a great story
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Title: A Saiyan For All Seasons
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2005 18:34 EST
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I feel sorry for bulma she's lonely for vegeta and she misses him. but for her to kiss yamcha...so on that note i now reallt can't wait for an update....
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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2005 23:11 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, don't worry the kiss test had to be done. It was a very good chapter. You captured Bulma's emotional turmoil extremely well. I can't wait to see how you come up with the next chappy.
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Reviewed By: dharmaserenity [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2005 11:04 EST
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well, I do like the story overall and can't wait to read the next installment. I just love your chemistry between Bulma and Vegeta - raw chemistry, that is. However, and this is just my personal preference so you can feel free to disregard this especially since it seems a choice you've thought through, but I really don't feel warm towards the characters when a lot of money and "high society" is mentioned. It makes sense that Bulma would be in the paparazzi spotlight but in the show it was never really harped on and for me that makes her more approachable as a character. As I said, it would make sense, but I just don't personally care for her nameing how many buildings she owns, etc. As I said, just a personal preference. Otherwise, the story is compelling, well written and the characters, Vegeta especially, are very much in character.
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Title: Chapter 6 review
Reviewed By: dharmaserenity [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2005 16:22 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH MY! Well, that was very hot indeed. You've managed to capture all that is Vegeta and gave us all a nice voyeuristic peak into something very private -- bless you for that! ;) This is great fic.
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Reviewed By: butterflyV On: February 13, 2005 18:59 EST
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Bulma 's biggest problem is that being raised a rich brat, she expects too much from everyone. When Vegeta returns, both of them (Bulma especially) are going to have to remember that you can't demand for more than one is able to give. Bulma should also remember that Vegeta has feelings too and should be taken into consideration. Vegeta had made it clear to her what she was getting herself into, and she should know better than to automatically assume that Vegeta wouldn't be a good parent because of his past.
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Reviewed By: Pisq On: February 13, 2005 16:55 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome! I loved it! Please don't make us wait too long!!
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Title: yippeeeeee!
Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2005 14:35 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm sticking with my evaluation that this is the best B/V get-together ever, and certainly your most wonderful look at this couple! The simplicity is one thing--but the richness of detail (like the costume ball and the whole metaphor it presents for the situation in this chappie!) and the emotional nuances in what is an everyday occurance make this a very special story. The two "controversial" elements--plans to terminate and some kissy kissy with a boyfriend of ten years--gosh, why haven't writers dealt with this stuff more often and openly and unabashedly? It's just human stuff, and the way you write it makes the B/V dynamic all the more gripping. There's no freaky alien monster kidnapping anyone or anything else that makes get-togethers so much fun--just plain good romantic drama. I love you, you know. :-)
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Title: Great work!
Reviewed By: dharmaserenity1 On: February 13, 2005 11:29 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to say this is excellent. You are capturing so much here - their personalities, the tension, the attraction, and in just little nuances which is so refreshing. I love your use of language and I'm looking forward to the rest. I've read the first 3 chapters but sadly need to get on with the rest of my day. Added this to my favorites. Curious to know if you are writing your own original work? I've read your comments after the fic and I too am writing my own stuff and sometimes this fan fic seems to just take over, huh? lol Anyway, wanted to say how much I enjoy this fic. Very nice writing, style, and the pacing is wonderfu. Thank you! btw: this won't let me use my username of "dharmaserenity" for some reason so I added a "1" afterwards.
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Reviewed By: M On: February 01, 2005 00:58 EST
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hey i was wondering when are you gonna update. i hope ur not just gonna leave the story like this. pls finish it. im dying to know what happens next. i wanna read more of this story and its been awhile since uve updated so pls. pls pls pls pls update this story soon...
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Reviewed By: Pisquenta [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2004 12:31 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful chapter!! Merry Christmas and thank you for writing this story!!
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