| "A Light amongst the Darkness" Reviews/Comments [ 66 ] |
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Reviewed By: Inu worshiper On: May 20, 2004 23:49 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved your fic it's fantastic! Finaly Inuyasha and Kagome kiss! *dances a happy dance*YAY!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: inu freak On: May 20, 2004 21:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow !!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: inu freak On: May 20, 2004 20:35 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVED your fic it was amazing! you are VEARY good (that's an understatement) keep writeing soon and FAST!
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Reviewed By: XxLeahxX [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2004 18:54 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story was still very good... again with the cliff though. I feel like your making Inuyasha a problem and that he's weak and not as strong as the others in the group... but perhaps your doin that on purpose? i'm making assumptions however, i do like that in this fanficton Kagome isn't the weakest link that is more of a problem then a help. I also like very much that Kikyou has not made an appearence yet ((and hopefully NEVER!)) i have NO fondness at all for her... I hope in the end you make sure that it's not sad... i have an animosity for sad ending. Te only thing i see wrong is the spelling... please update soon... ^_*
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Reviewed By: xrebxl On: May 20, 2004 15:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You should never stop updating, I am anxious to know what happens.
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2004 11:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the story please update soon!!
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Reviewed By: Aitu (not signed in) On: May 20, 2004 09:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's me again! Too lazy to sign in. hehehe. I don't have any more questions for today, =(, but thanks for answering all my other ones *big grin*. I didn't really think you'd answer the one about if Kagome has to die or not but a girl's gotta try, hehehe. Good job on chapter 10 was it? I forgots, but I liked it. OUuu, Inuyasha's gunna be jealous!hehehehe. Keep on writing I'll be waiting! Stupid advise by me for the day: Don't try to cook soup in a toaster.
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Title: I HATE clif hangers!!!
Reviewed By: inu freak On: May 18, 2004 22:50 CDT
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I HATE CLIF HANGERS!!! I loved your fic! I HATE CLIF HANGERS!!! It was sooooooo cooooool!!!I HATE CLIF HANGERS!!!The fight sceans were amazining!I HATE CLIF HANGERS!!!Keep writeing! PLEAS!I HATE CLIF HANGERS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Inuzands [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2004 15:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome chapter! The fight scene was written extremely well, I thought. It should be interesting to see how hard Kagome has to work in order to keep Sess and Inuyasha from beating eachother to pieces. :) Can't wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: Aitu [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2004 12:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now you'll know what six people think!I really loved reading your story. It is so original and unlike anything that I have read before. I like the whole sacred Miko thing going on here. Is this something that happens on later in the series or is it your idea? (I've probably only seen episodes 1-10.. okay I'm exagerating again, more like I've only seen the old ones the play on the cartoon network.)Does the prophecy mean that Kagome has to die in order to save the world from the darkness? Also, where can I find the pictures that you made for this story.. maybe I wasn't paying close enough attention.. I tend to do that sometimes. Let's see, for my 5,000th question: in the begining you mention how Kagome and Inuyasha's interactions were different in the American and Japanese versions. Could you explain? Haha- I have this feeling that you are going to be like "Curiosity killed the cat!" Keep up the good work, and despite what people say, there are not that many errors.. Trust me, I've seen some pretty bad fics that looked and sounded like a second grader was writing them. Update as soon as you can and I will be back to read more. Until then- Ciao! - Aitu
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Reviewed By: XxLeahxX [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2004 21:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story was great! i really enjoyed it. I'm really suprised more people haven't reviewed... there just lazy. Your spelling is okay... a few mistakes everyones human. Your style of writing can get kind of confusing but i'm blonde... so... that could explain it. No offense *gothis slave* but "a lot" is two words not one. *laughs* ^_^
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Reviewed By: gothic slave On: April 24, 2004 22:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this story, but the grammer and spelling could use alittle working on...There were ALOT of mistakes and grammer problems that shouldnt have been there...but thats okay. But this story is really original. I loved it! Please continue soon
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Reviewed By: coolboy87 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2004 21:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed ur fic and hope that u update it soon. This is getting very intersting and i can't wait to read ur next update.^_^"
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Reviewed By: thavnchick [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2004 01:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a great story i cant wait to see what happens! its really good. Hurry with the next chapter!!!!!:)
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Reviewed By: inuzands [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2004 00:15 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Actually, I'm not bored at all by this fic. It's got a lot of depth to it, which is nice for a change. Even though I must admit to looking forward to some Inu/kag waffy-ness. :) Can't help it. Please keep writing, and I look forward to reading more of this story. :)
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