| "A Light amongst the Darkness" Reviews/Comments [ 66 ] |
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Reviewed By: phat dan On: August 23, 2004 19:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ur a bitch u know that how could make inuyasha say kikyos name when he was kissing kagome thats pure evil you baka they better make up or this story will offially suck!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Amazing
Reviewed By: nymphminxgoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2004 16:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...This is one of the few fanfics I have truly enjoyed. I sat down today and read the whole thing for the first time. I hope you update soon. I'm obessed with your story and I might have to start stalking you if you don't update soon. Just kidding. But seriously I'm in love with this story! I read your AN and I'm sorry you are having a hard time with one jerk reviewer. Don't pay any attention to him/her. Follow your heart, if you love what you are doing then that's all that should matter.
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Title: Nice work
Reviewed By: Tenshin On: July 26, 2004 18:02 CDT
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While I just started reading this fic I am already quite impressed with your work. The plot is unique and very interesting. The only error I have found so far, besides minor spelling mistakes, was a slight lack in pronoun usage. For instance the word kekkai was used frequently. I am always happy to learn a new word, I'm assuming Japanese, but try to use a synonym to replace it on occasion. Keep up the good work and include more Japanese!
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Reviewed By: JMarie-Serena On: July 18, 2004 23:46 CDT
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Ok Tal, i'm at home for a week it seems due to my Gall bladder surgery... so now you HAVE to update cause i'm going out of my mind and can't get comfortable enough to sit and read. it is imperitive you update soon! PLEASESPLEASES!!! and on a side note so you can update our fellow workers, i'm doing OK but still am in quite some pain!
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Reviewed By: Blademaster On: July 14, 2004 09:51 CDT
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Exellent chapter please update soon , sorry cant think of anything else to write
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Reviewed By: JMarie-Serena On: July 13, 2004 00:26 CDT
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Hey great chapter.. i need more now you know.... anyways e-mail me a copy of that pic sometime too will ya? Hope your mom is doing better! see ya around!
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Title: excellent story
Reviewed By: ewunia On: July 12, 2004 13:14 CDT
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The story is great I love it. It is really interesting and I like the lenght of the chapters. Please keep writing and if someone sends you a flame even if it is a really bad one just ignore it. There are screwed people out there and the best way to deal with them is just to ignore them
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Reviewed By: MIztikal_Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2004 04:39 CDT
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well I think that you should just ignore the flamer. Dumbass people just can't get the clue. It's obvious that this person is bent out of shape for some reason. They must really like it if they keep coming back to view more. I would so love to see your new picture!! I have no talent and it brings me a smile to know that you have something new to show! if you want could you email it to me? miztikaldragon@msn.com. I can't wait for the next chapter, so please keep up the great work and update asap. I love your story soo much. Krystal.
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Reviewed By: firelord [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2004 21:05 CDT
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don't let some jerk keep you frome posting your pics if he/she reviews tell him/her to do any better if he/she can and not critasise thoues that put ther art up so peppole can see it i bet he/she will just make an ecuse not to do it.
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Reviewed By: Sesshoumarugrl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2004 19:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is sooooooo good !!! its one of the best i read so far !!i absolutly love it !! CAnt wait until the next !
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Reviewed By: Blademaster On: June 28, 2004 13:37 CDT
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YAY! I like long chapters please update soon and um ... yeah i suck at reviews so lets just leave it at that. Oh and could you please draw pics of Yuki, the Gauntlet of Wind, and lastly the Fire Plate of Darkness? Hope Im not asking too much.
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Reviewed By: MIztikal_Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2004 04:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow what an adrenaline rush. lol YAY! Go sorano!!! lol can't wait to find out what happens next! I like Sesshy and his somewhat caring emotions. He can't always be cold. Besides somepeople become over dramatic w/ him and it ruins the character sometimes. But I belive you've portrayed hims character perfectly. OONess is allowed. Keep up the great work and update asap!!!!!! lol Krystal.
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Reviewed By: kikyo killer [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2004 16:43 CDT
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that was a veary veary veary veary veary veary veary veary long chapter I like long chapters!!! any ways....update soon!!! and your right I do need to grow up....I think I wrote that reveiw becas I was on a suger high and I read manga 13 the one with kikyo when ever I see her I get in a veary hatefull mood...and becas I'm just a plain crazy kid with a computer that likes to curse a lot!!!! update soon!!! I still love your story even if you called me an ass hole!!!!^_^
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Reviewed By: Blademaster On: June 25, 2004 09:07 CDT
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all I want to know is what stupid ass-wipe thought your pics were bad cause if I find him I will kill him you are a great artist and author. I will kick his sorry ass if I ever meet him so dont give it a second thought.
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Reviewed By: JMarie-Serena On: June 24, 2004 00:43 CDT
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Ok i stop visiting a few days and i miss something... who is this person who is such a dickhole? i'm sorry i was under the impression that she was drawing the pictures as a favour to us readers whose visual imagination has been ruined by TV... Hasn't this persons mother ever said if you don't have anything nice to say don't say anything at all... now we all have to suffer because i can't kill all the stupid people in the world... if my sisters were around i'd make them pay!!! (for lack of anythign else to beat) andyways hun don't take it to heart, we love your writing, and thank you for the great visuals... no my slave.. back to the writing!!!! i'll go track down this ass and give'em hell and teach em a lesson! ;)
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