| "A Light amongst the Darkness" Reviews/Comments [ 66 ] |
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Reviewed By: Aitu [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2004 12:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now you'll know what six people think!I really loved reading your story. It is so original and unlike anything that I have read before. I like the whole sacred Miko thing going on here. Is this something that happens on later in the series or is it your idea? (I've probably only seen episodes 1-10.. okay I'm exagerating again, more like I've only seen the old ones the play on the cartoon network.)Does the prophecy mean that Kagome has to die in order to save the world from the darkness? Also, where can I find the pictures that you made for this story.. maybe I wasn't paying close enough attention.. I tend to do that sometimes. Let's see, for my 5,000th question: in the begining you mention how Kagome and Inuyasha's interactions were different in the American and Japanese versions. Could you explain? Haha- I have this feeling that you are going to be like "Curiosity killed the cat!" Keep up the good work, and despite what people say, there are not that many errors.. Trust me, I've seen some pretty bad fics that looked and sounded like a second grader was writing them. Update as soon as you can and I will be back to read more. Until then- Ciao! - Aitu
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Reviewed By: XxLeahxX [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2004 21:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story was great! i really enjoyed it. I'm really suprised more people haven't reviewed... there just lazy. Your spelling is okay... a few mistakes everyones human. Your style of writing can get kind of confusing but i'm blonde... so... that could explain it. No offense *gothis slave* but "a lot" is two words not one. *laughs* ^_^
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Reviewed By: gothic slave On: April 24, 2004 22:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this story, but the grammer and spelling could use alittle working on...There were ALOT of mistakes and grammer problems that shouldnt have been there...but thats okay. But this story is really original. I loved it! Please continue soon
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Reviewed By: coolboy87 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2004 21:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed ur fic and hope that u update it soon. This is getting very intersting and i can't wait to read ur next update.^_^"
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Reviewed By: thavnchick [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2004 01:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a great story i cant wait to see what happens! its really good. Hurry with the next chapter!!!!!:)
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Reviewed By: inuzands [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2004 00:15 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Actually, I'm not bored at all by this fic. It's got a lot of depth to it, which is nice for a change. Even though I must admit to looking forward to some Inu/kag waffy-ness. :) Can't help it. Please keep writing, and I look forward to reading more of this story. :)
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