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| "Light Meets Darkness" Reviews/Comments [ 62 ] | | Pages (5): [ 1 2 3 4 5 › » ] | Title: endings
Reviewed By: inuzumarose [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2006 20:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very good and imaginitive fic. I just have one reccomendation for furthur endings. The end of this fic was a bit of a summary, and because of this it felt very rushed. GIVE us the scene between Yohji and Dameon. Take the summary ane write it out. If you are pressed for time, cut the less important things out. A great way to end an angst/romance fic such as this is with a tender, comforting citrus. It should be a lemon between a set relationship that you have been building for a long time, i.e. Farfarello/Shuldich/Ken. Fill it with fluff. Make it utterly satisfying. THAT would really end your story. OH! one more thing. thank you SO much for trying hard with the Germain in your story. It made a big difference.
| Reviewed By: Narca [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2006 22:20 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This has got to be my favorite Weiss Kreuz fic.! It has just the right amount of violence and romance and supernatural.
| Reviewed By: Beysie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2004 02:19 CDT
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Incredible! Awsome! Fantastic! (How's that for stroking the ego, eh?) It's all true of this fic though. I absolutely loved it! You portrayed everyone wonderfully, and I adored all your OC's! I'm putting you into my favorite author's list. Thanks to you, I'm hooked even more on Weiss Kreuz! Arigato!
| Title: Light Meets Darkness
Reviewed By: HeatherR On: October 25, 2004 10:14 CDT
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Wow! That was harsh, but I guess I can't blame Farfie and Schu for being so nasty. And gorey. But I could've used a little more lovey-doveyness at the end! Boo-Hoo! But besides that it was great! You are really good at describing these creatures you're creating, and I'm really glad there's a sequel. If there wasn't I'd have a lot more to say about the abrupt ending! But all is forgiven and I'm off to read the other! And don't forget about "Ashes, Ashes..."!!! Sorry, I don't want to pressure you, but I'm addicted to your stories now! ^__^ Hurry, hurry!
| Title: Awesome!
Reviewed By: Lisullenlye [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2004 01:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lmao, I rated eveyrthing ten.Im obsessed with this series.I've saved it to my computer, I've printed it out, I've put the first chapter page on aff on my favourites.And I'm going insane hoping for the sequel to be posted soon.O_OI'm going to force my fellow yaoi obsessers to read and review this too.lol.This fic is awesome! You brought in fantasy, demons and magic.Its awesome!!! And completely original, you can tell you put a LOT of effort into this. And crap, you should try writing an actual book, it would a top seller.(If you do, PLEASE TELL ME!!;-;) Yeah, this is the freaky girl that emailed you earlier;;; My names Aubrey too so when I read your fic and loved it, then went to your house to see if there were any other stories, I saw your name was Aubrey, and I went insane. Its like alternate universes, in one there's the talented Aubree, who writes fanfics, and is loved by reviews. Then in the other, there is Aubrey, who sucks at writing fanfics, and gets very few reviews.-.-; *bows to you many many times* Thakyou for existing, and whoever created you. I REALLY hope you post the sequel soon, I'll reviewing every.single.chapter. ;;;
| Reviewed By: Priss368 On: October 09, 2004 11:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been anxiously awaiting the next chappie in this fic & I'm not disappointed! Your writing is very descriptive & thorough! I've read alot of fanfiction-Harry Potter recently-and you are one of the best authors I've read. Farfie is so going to eat Wut for a snack! I bet the next time our lovey trio gets together after this it's going to make for another very hot scene! You write those very well! Please update soon!
| Reviewed By: SilverRayne On: October 07, 2004 10:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've followed ur story for a long time and I absolutely love it! Keep up the good work! You're almost done!
| Reviewed By: Evey On: October 01, 2004 23:56 CDT
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Awsome chapter!! poor Ken!! =( But...now that Farfie has come Wutty is in big trouble!! YAY!! haha update again soon!!!
| Reviewed By: dethorats On: September 24, 2004 03:56 CDT
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Excellent cliffhanger of an ending. Poor, poor Ken...you torture him so well. I'm really looking forward to seeing how this pans out. Great Fic!
| Title: YOU UPDATED!!!!!!
Reviewed By: CC On: September 23, 2004 17:00 CDT
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I was getting worried there for a while when nothing showed up after that brutal cliffhanger you left us with. So happy that you didn't abandon this story, I would have had to nag you. PLEASE don't wait that long to update again, I really want to read the rest of this soon. Great job on this chapter, by the way! Ja, CC
| Reviewed By: jade_tiger [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2004 14:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hmmm it seems it can't go higher than 10...damn! ok this story is one of the best stories i have ever had the great pleasure to read and i thank you for writting it. personally i was kinda iffy with farf when my friend started gushing about him...but this story...*tear* thank you! i have been firmly reprimanded *hangs head* this story is in the top five best fics i have ever read. then again i've read all your stories and they're all great...hmmm i'm jealous, but i can't stop reading it! *holds out farfarello plushy* my offering for this great story, please continue or drastic measures will be taken...
| Reviewed By: Macha On: September 12, 2004 19:53 CDT
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Loved your story to make sure you understand my seriousness I'll repeat herewhat I said on Adult fan.net Update this and a Tale of two chibi's soon or I'll die from depression and haunt you the rest of your days forcing you to live with the guilt of what you've done! Kay?
| Reviewed By: KitsuneHashiba On: August 23, 2004 20:57 CDT
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RAH! HOW DARE YOU LEAVE US AT A CLIFFHANGER?!?! THAT'S EVIL AND MEEEEEEEEEEEEAN! (Was that good enough to guarantee a WutxKen scene?) *: You're sick and demented. F*cking sado-masochistic maniac. K: I am not, I just happen to love Ken very, very much. *: So you torture him to express that. K: Sure, why not? *: Ri-ight... (This moment of randomness is brought to you by MASTERCARD. Moving to Japan: $3,000 Joining the Yakuza: Your soul. Becoming an evil drug lord that threatens little children: 5 years. Watching with a mixture of delight and terror as an out-of-control Siberian comes your way with murder in his eyes: Priceless. For everything else, there's Mastercard.)
| Title: Glory!
Reviewed By: Trevanna [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2004 01:05 CDT
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I'm really looking forward to reading the "how it could have been" of LMD, can't tell you how curious I am. Painfully curious. But no Dameon...I dunno...I kinda adore him, ya know? Back to the review at hand! I would kinda like a Wut plushie...it would be all cute and squishy. I like Wut, he knows what he wants and doesn't have any qualms about it. But I think I've already exhaulted his glory...and I can't exhalt too much because he is kinda brutal and kinda crazy. Okay, a lot crazy. But damn if it didn't feel good when he took a bite out of Geist. Bad Wut! Do not hurt Feuer! He is beautiful and Winter's to play with! Very bad Wut! You do know that if you harm Winter and Feuer I will be very displeased, don't you? I do love them so. They're adorable and cute and everything that's plushie worthy in this world. Poor Ken, he's never going to heal properly if Schu and Farfie keep...showing their love. Of course, given their situation, I'd probably by showing my love to Ken as much as possible too. Silly Ken, going out without reinforcements. Of course, internal reinforcements help. Breaking from the review a moment here. Now, when Persia does his "deny these dark beast their tomorrows" don't you just want to cheer or something? It's like he's got pompoms and is cheering "Go Weiß!" Weird, I know, but I can't help it. It's his Weiß pep talk. NO...just NO. You can't have Fighter show up, start kicking ass, make a fantastically snarky remark, then leave me hanging. I shri | Reviewed By: Evey On: June 28, 2004 22:02 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT fic so far! Absolutely loving it!! Never read one like this and there are very few great fics with ken and schu! I love that pairing!! Farfie's great too. Anyway, update soon. Great writing!
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