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| "Light Meets Darkness" Reviews/Comments [ 62 ] | | Pages (5): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 ] | Reviewed By: bunnicle On: April 23, 2004 21:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You must, and when i say you must, YOU MUST write more! please!
| Reviewed By: Kati [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2004 13:55 CDT
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When I saw chap 4, I was sooo hapy. I like it, so write some more. Please ( big puppy eyes)!! I know, that you need time, but I can't wait.
| Reviewed By: Trevanna [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2004 04:14 CDT
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Wow, this story is so very awesome. The writing is fluid and clear, the plot is fresh and addictive. I look forward to reading more...so much more.
| Reviewed By: Miko no Tears and Aya [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2004 21:29 CDT
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wow, again! this is fabulous, a Wind Master, huh? thats pretty cool. I love you're lines, some of them are awesome, and just make me want to laugh, others were deep as well, absolutely fabulous. i was just wondering, do u play any role playing games like dungeons and dragons? i dont mind, i love the game myself and have even made a class for it. love the elements. oh, btw, im on the hunt for good pics of the guys. i have ideas forming, but depending on what i find and how long it takes to find it and how busy i am, this might take a little while. though please update soon, i almost dropped my coffee mug when i found the update message in my email! Thank U, this is great! Ashes
| Title: chap. 4
Reviewed By: Lychee SSJ [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2004 20:02 CDT
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Wheee!! another chappie! Oh, thanks for making me snort coffee out my nose with that whole "guess what he's got two eyes and is a demon isn't that cool?" quote. Ouch. Poor Youji, killing innocents. I hope he can deal with it, it wasn't his (or Ken's for that matter) fault, it would've happened at some point, right? Wind Master huh, that's cool. I was wracking my brain trying to figure out what the others' powers would be. I mean, you've got an empath, telepath, pre-cog, telekintic, and a (not quite so psycho) demon, and now a wind controller. What's left? Oh! there's pyrokinetics! or lightning/electricity control? or um...other stuff. I'm sure whatever you do will be awesome. Nothing to do with the story, but recently at Anime Boston there were four girls dressed as Schwartz. Poor things, I scared the shit out of them by screaming "Schwartz!" and running over in glee to get their picture :D It was so nice to see something other than a Sailor Scout, Inu Yasha, or Vash. Yeah Weiss Kreuz!!
| Title: !!
Reviewed By: shadow_tempest On: April 21, 2004 18:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! That was too good! I loved it! But U ended it on a cliffhanger again! An even better cliffhanger than last time! Please update soon!!!!
| Reviewed By: wannabeinanime [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2004 16:24 CDT
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Poor Yohji! I feel so bad for him. I love the way you write though. The cliffhangers aren't too bad as long as you don't keep me waiting too long. I can't wait to see who Dameon is and what he's all about! Keep it up! ^_^
| Title: ??
Reviewed By: shadow_tempest On: April 18, 2004 16:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! This is a great story! But U left it at a cliffhanger! Please update soon!
| Reviewed By: Lychee SSJ [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2004 16:05 CDT
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ooohh, this is cool... soooo, what're the other pairings? Does everyone get paired up? That means there's another threesome, ne? What's Youji's powers? What happens next? I want to knoowwww!!!!!
| Reviewed By: wannabeinanime [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2004 22:30 CDT
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I love this fic! It's so great. Sorry, I was kinda babbling there for a sec. I think it's wonderful that you managed to incorporate all three or my favorite people in this little want/need triangle. Keep up the good work, I'll be waiting for another update soon. Ja.
| Title: Love it
Reviewed By: Tailyn On: April 16, 2004 20:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it! I've never seen that particular threesome, but it sure makes life intereting. And I gotta wonder who Aya'll end up with. I'm guessing Yohji, but my second guess is Brad...since their the only free ones.... Anyways, write more, soon, please!
| Reviewed By: Babbling Brook On: April 16, 2004 19:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting story. The writing style supports the story and flows smoothly. I did not see any glaring spelling and grammar errors. I have enjoyed both the plot and the tastefully done citrus scenes. For their first time together it was nice to see variation by not going all the way, plus it had some relevance to the plot - I think. I am curious what the other three Weiß members' powers will be, how they will handle this charmingly unique bond between Ken, Schuldich, and Farfarello, and the ramifications of it all. Not to mention their own significant other(s). Is there going to be a second three some so all eight of them are matched up or am I stuck in a box not seeing possible partners outside of Weiß or Schwarz. Anyway, I hope you continue this story because my curiosity is up (Meoww) and would love to read the answers in future chapters. ~ Babbling_Brook42@hotmail.com
| Reviewed By: Kati On: April 15, 2004 13:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Only four words: I JUST LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!
| Reviewed By: Miko no Tears and Aya [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2004 12:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW, ken has it going on now! im impressed that Schu is deep. wow that conversation was great! i fel as if Ken, Schu and Farfarello have found their place and people! never thought that would happen with Farfarello ofall people. I love what you have done with those three. though what are the pairings going to be? im dying to know. you sould have seen me when i found out teh next chapter was up! i can wait for the next one! Keep up the great work! I'll see what i can do for a pic, im not great but im getting better, if thats ok with you? Ashes
| Reviewed By: Miko no Tears and Aya [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2004 01:26 CDT
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please, please finish this! it had me laughing, in despair and a variety of other emotions, and that was only in the irst 2 chaps! i hope you finish this as its really good so far! Ashes
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