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Reviewed By: Princess_of_the_Sayains [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2009 20:36 PDT
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Absolutely stunning. You are such a talented write Temp. Have you ever thought of writing some original material to publish or are you all about the fanfics? If you ever do write a book, do let me know :). Beautiful plot, unbelievable characterization I mean you kept Vegeta's badass attitude even after he admitted to himself that he loved her. I've seen a lot of authors who totally screw that up. As usually wonderfully creative. I'll have you know this is only the second fanfic to ever make me cry. When Vegeta killed Bulma and started crying in his space pod I lost it. I lose many hours of sleep reading this fic XD. Love you temp, keep up the great work.
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Title: Beatiful
Reviewed By: jambacute [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2009 00:09 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man I can't give you enough credit for this story. it made laugh (gotta love the dark homur in this story) it made me cry and cry somemore. [ chapping] I have read som chapter on fanfiction when i notice you censcor some of the parts. i was "you got to have the story on mediaminor" and guess what it was there. I really enjoy the read. it too me three whole days to read (with breaks in between) anyways this is a great story along with Lab Monkey. i should say that you are one of my top authors up to date. Please continue the good work. It is very hard to find good writers these day.
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Reviewed By: jambacute [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2009 16:07 PDT
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ohh whoe is meeeeeeeee! how saddddd (tears in my eyes)!!!!
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Title: the gate of judgement
Reviewed By: Caslite [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2009 20:23 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i'm nt flaming just stating that "The Gates of Judgement" is actually called the check in station. love the story so far
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Reviewed By: surmise On: August 07, 2009 23:03 PDT
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Yep, expect a review on every one of your B/V fics. :] This was the first fanfic that I read by you! EE, GRAVITY ROOM XD But besides that, this pretty much ended it for me with other authors, as many have said in the other reviews. I'm extremely glad I read this and you're just amazing. :]
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Title: against all odds
Reviewed By: tigressofrain On: April 06, 2009 08:58 PDT
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absolutely amazing..i started your story yesterday and finished now at 11:55 am...(yes i did sleep but when i woke, i continued) your description of Vegeta was very on point, and loved how you made him kill frieza which is how dbz shouldve have went *glares at akira toriyama* this is one of the best a.u's i have ever read..please keep writing
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Reviewed By: . On: January 05, 2009 07:49 PST
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im pretty sure you know how awesome this is... im not sure why you dont have more reviews on this site. quick question - theres a small discrepancy in bulma's age... in the beginning, she was taken from earth when she was 12, and was in frieza's court 15 years later, and later on, she was drinking coffee, she'd started at 9 and 15 years later she was still drinking it... hmmm... lol i'll assume she's 24 - it'll mean she has longer with vegeta - i love how yummy you've made him in this fic.
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Reviewed By: Kami_Dee [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2007 01:33 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to say, You've ruined ALL other DBZ Bulma/Vegeta fics (which is all I read anyway) for me. Now all fanfics are left half-read or angrily exited when I realise that none could meet the high standards that this fic has achieved ^__^ Now I seemed doomed to wait anxiously for anything remotely Bulma/Vegeta related from you. Excellent work!
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Title: Against All Odds
Reviewed By: cas0239 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2007 12:07 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely loved this story. I hope you plan on writing more chapters for it. The last one was a cliff hanger and i am yearning for the rest of the story...KEEP UP THE EXCELLENT W0RK!
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Title: Hail the author!
Reviewed By: theblueone [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2006 10:28 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
For the second time, this story is still some of the best Vegeta characterization I have ever read. You capture the darkness of serving under Frieza perfectly. I commend you. Bravo!
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Title: Art for you.
Reviewed By: theblueone [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2006 20:27 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, this is the second time I've read this story. I drew a picture for it and it's posted here on MediaMiner. I thought you might give it a look and if you like it maybe tag it to your fic. The link is: http://fa.mediaminer.org/39/191839.jpg Enjoy!
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Reviewed By: chiku [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2006 07:33 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Brilliant story, you have a great style of writing, i have read some of your others, i like the bit about the rubber duckies!..anyway going to read the sequal now while i wait for the lab monkey update...
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Reviewed By: theblueone [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2006 01:46 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Amazing story. I couldn't stop reading it once I started. The character development in this story was perfect. All hail the gifted author!
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Reviewed By: LunaticPandora On: September 28, 2005 19:50 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay for good fanfics! A couple chapters made me wanna cry, but it was all good! You never made it through the worst parts seem like Veggie-chan was a wimp. Though you did make him rather insane @.@ Oh well, theres an insane lustful beast inside all of us!
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Title: Awesome!
Reviewed By: Saiyazon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2005 18:58 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it! Perfect plot, your details are too die for, and its just so so wonderful!
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