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Title: Tears!
Reviewed By: Saiyazon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2005 21:21 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow wasn't expecting the last couple of chapters. Nice plot twists. The last chapter made me cry!
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Title: Awesome!
Reviewed By: Saiyazon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2005 23:35 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
So far so good. Extensive lemons, very involved plot, and reacurring, well developed symbols. Well done.
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Reviewed By: fyrechylde [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2005 01:34 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...on scale of 1 to 10, you are a 13. That fic has definitely become one of my all time favorites next to World Enough and Time and The Awakening Saga. You are an extremely gifted writer. I love the fact that you made Bulma dark, but you didn't break her. She was a little nutty (after all she's been through she should be) but you allowed her to be believable and strong. It put on the level with Vegita...not innocent, but there is hope for redemption. *shakes head* Wow...utter wow. When Vegita watched that last hologram while he was in the pod, I broke down into tears. *sighs* Beautifully written...now, ON TO THE SEQUEL!!! *grinz*
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Title: It was HOT
Reviewed By: amora [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2005 06:27 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was the Hottest B/V Fanfic I ever read to a completion. Write MOre gurl cause ur on a role.
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Title: *drools*
Reviewed By: Pisquenta [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2004 13:34 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This has got to be the best B/V fanfic I've ever read! I think that both are exactly like the anime characters (I never got any mangas). After I read this story, I could never read anything that showed Vegeta soft and Bulma weak! Thank you!!!
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Title: What a ride!
Reviewed By: LisaB [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2004 09:07 PDT
Comment/Review:
I have just promoted this to my short list of All-Time AUs. This was a great story and you told it in remarkable fashion. My favorite chapter was the moments of epiphany during the purge for Radditz and Vegeta. That was very well done. You captured Vegeta and Bulma's personalities perfectly and I bought every action they made--you did a great job using internal dialogue to show us their reasonings and motivation. The only negative thing about this fic is that you could use a beta, but even the urge to pull out my red pen did not detract from my overall enjoyment of this wonderful fic. Brava! *toddles off to the sequel*
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2004 21:50 PDT
Comment/Review:
yey yey yey! You updated here! I've been reading At Odds on your website and love yr work! Yes, this chapter was a bit long, a bit sappy, and maybe not as gloriously efficient as the previous one--but shoot, woman, it's a B/V lemon-o-rama! How could you deny your readers this? Weeeee! What a great story. Am following your stuff with pure delight and marveling at your talent for Saiyan romance!!!
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Reviewed By: Cioheos On: July 05, 2004 20:31 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic blew me away! WOW! I love it. You are the bestest author ever. LOVE IT!!!!
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Reviewed By: roxychica091 On: July 03, 2004 19:38 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story!! i luv it sooo much... please update!!
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Reviewed By: 1lfduyhij On: June 18, 2004 09:05 PDT
Comment/Review:
Holy mother of crap! this is the best fic I have ever read. You need to replace the names and get published.
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Reviewed By: GetaGirl 247 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2004 13:42 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If I give you some lemons, will you make lemonade. Keep up the good work, and I am wating ever so patiently for the next chapter. ********************************************** Vegeta: Don't let that pathetic onna lie to you, she is pulling her hair out crying about when will the next chapter be out. GetaGirl 247: Am not!!!(looks around at various peices of wet hair lying on the ground and sighs in defeat.) Bulma: Just because you aren't getting any at home doesn't mean that you have to rush the lemon. Wait, what the hell am I talking about. Vegeta, get your ass over here and kiss me right now. Uh, Tempting Temptation can you please (Oh, Vegeta put your hand right there) hurry up with our lemon. GetaGirl 247: Wow, a lemon right in front of my eyes. Who needs a story when I have my warped little mind. Bulma and Vegeta: Shut up!!! ************************************************* Seriously, great story. Happy writing.
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Title: yey!
Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2004 13:57 PDT
Comment/Review:
Of course he chooses family over throne but it's always interesting to see how he gets there. This fic adds so many luscious details to that psychological journey, makes lots of damn sense (I liked how V was used sexually only once by F but that F chose to make him an heir instead of a concubine--that worked so well, loved that part!) and gives everyone a hell of a plot to ride! And now you've given us a little symmetry with that regen tank tease scene! The confrontation over the cold shower was perfect B/V. YEY! The B/V fanfic form is not dead--long live the B/V! debbiechan
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Reviewed By: Yari [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2004 17:52 PDT
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**sobs** That last paragraph was just so... PRETTY! I really like this story! You gotta update soon!
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Reviewed By: Geta Girl 24/7 On: June 07, 2004 17:26 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am sooo glad that after all of this Vegeta tourturing that he and his blue-haired angel are back together again. Now that they are back together, when are they going to get Trunks.
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Title: freakin awesome
Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2004 09:25 PDT
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mm.org is blipping on me or else I'd written even sooner to let you know how much this chapter delighted me. So glad to have discovered you here--this fic is so well-done, with all the grandeur of the highest, bestest, most emotional B/V romance! AAh! If the DBZ story were only all Vegeta's story, then a lot of dorks like me could die happy watching that anime! LOVELY job. debbiechan
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