| "The Conception of Goten?" Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] |
Title: WOW!!!
Reviewed By: Sarah aka Vega [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2007 13:02 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVED IT! You mixed his love of food, her harpiness, his passion.... oh my, great!!! Sarah Slutz sarah-slutz@hotmail.com
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Title: Finally!
Reviewed By: Kricket [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2007 22:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dear gods! I've been waiting forever to find a decent Goku and Chi-Chi fiction. This was phenomenal! All of the other ones I've read were all "Goku was like 'Duh what is sex?'. Thank you!!!!!!
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Title: Need... cake...
Reviewed By: Katiefoolery [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2006 05:46 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Thank-you, that was delicious. I'd say more, but I have a sudden and inexplicable craving for chocolate cake mix...
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Title: Well done!!
Reviewed By: Trunks lover [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2006 23:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought that was soooo sweet! thats my favorite couple next to goten/bra. LOVED IT much luv, Trunks lover
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Reviewed By: cyzay [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2005 07:29 CDT
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brilliant! Chichi especially was done perfectly, i loved the beginning. Goku was done beutifully too. Very well written and i especially love the tease at the end.
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Title: Finally
Reviewed By: chidogs [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2005 23:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am working my way through all of the fics I have seen recommended. This one was totally wonderful. I loved the spot on characters, and it was fun to see a ChiChi who was herself, yet showed how much she loved Goku, just as himself. Sweet. And I loved that you didn't make him a moron. Thank you. I adore Goku as much as Vegeta.
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Reviewed By: roseofvegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2005 12:51 CST
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Very well written. I loved how you portrayed ChiChi in the beginning. You really nailed her personality. Brilliantly written. Now go and write some more. ^_^
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Reviewed By: rikkufx On: January 24, 2005 06:55 CST
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yooou know more people should write goku and chichi fics they are sooo neglected al i ever see are B/V fics its enough to make you go crazy good job
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Reviewed By: anne bolyen On: July 26, 2004 16:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am soooooooooooooo glad you wrote this for one thing i have been looking all over the place for a goku and chichi (is that spelled right)fanfic they are my favirote and by far the cuteest couple and they show so much love.Goku loves chichi unlimetedly.bye
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Reviewed By: Elenek [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2004 20:50 CDT
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I am a horrid, horrid, horrid person. I've read all 4 of your fics and love them all. On my profile, I have you on my list of Reccomended Reading. I just realized that I have not reviewed any of your stories however. Feel free to beat me. I deserve it. This story was fantastick. I love kitchen lemons. I thought it was interesting how ChiChi did not want to deal with him as SSJ. It was sweet that he turned back just for her. -EL-
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Reviewed By: Dark Fate [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2004 11:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hn. Veeerrry nice fic. I am generally not a big G/CC fan, but this was excellent. Hot, tasty lemon.
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Reviewed By: purring kitten On: May 19, 2004 00:00 CDT
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damn that was good. love cc/gk, so much yaoi around (like it too since it has goku as main character and make some semblance of sense) i was missing them togheter. luck we have 'you may kiss the bride' to and this story here. very good indeed. can i hope for more one shots like this one?
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Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2004 21:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
Mmmm, must have cake now. ~__^ Great job, you! And I have to agree with Chi Chi. His normal form suits him better. Now about that kindred story... *twirls shiney, new spork in her hand*
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Reviewed By: Sageling On: May 17, 2004 07:58 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Brilliant story!
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Title: Ya-boo-sucks?
Reviewed By: Carla S. On: May 16, 2004 21:20 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What exactly does that mean? I mena, if you're going to insult me, at least do it in English... AMERICAN English. I already told you it was a great fic. I refuse to say it again.
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Title: yippeee, Chi gets some!
Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2004 19:09 CDT
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Trying to correct karma here and leave reviews for stories read a while back. LOVE this one bc I happen to be fond of G/CC couplings, chocolate, and your delightful humor. Narrative voice very compelling--you know I'd occasionally imagined the "before the Cell games" encounter with these 2 but vanilla geek that I am, I never thought of something so hot. WELL-TOLD. debbiechan
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Title: Wooo its getting hot in here so take off all ur clothes or just Goku
Reviewed By: DBZ Maniac On: April 30, 2004 18:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dis is excellent not enough g/cc and im a big fan good work keep it up and hurry up with it or ill have 2 murder u lol jk jk
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Reviewed By: LisaB [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2004 14:00 CDT
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Ha! That was great. I've always been one to believe there was more there than the anime showed (Take THAT, AM!) and this captures it beautifully! I never thought about his looking so different until you pointed it out, but you're right, it would bug me too if I was CC--a constant reminder of all the fighting/training/etc. Good job! Now go work on Kindred. (You do realize there's no excuses now, right? BTW, I can beta if you need one.)
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Title: Pant...Pant...Pant
Reviewed By: Anita Dick NOW!! On: April 20, 2004 11:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Hate You! Dammit Barb you don't need a beta!This was hot, wonderful, fantastically written and now I'm gonna be feeling deprived for the rest of the day!! BRAVO!! Now, are you gonna update Kindred or are you intentionally delaying it so I'll have something to read at the nursing home?!
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Reviewed By: christabeleve61 On: April 20, 2004 11:42 CDT
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I love it. Great use of batter and banter.
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Reviewed By: Chief316 On: April 17, 2004 15:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally something besides Bulma/Vegeta or Goku/Vegeta. I enjoyed reading it. Keep up the good work
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Title: I'm so shocked, I had to pick myself up off the floor
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72-Carla On: April 17, 2004 09:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, well, well, I guess you sure showed me, huh? It is wonderful Barb. So well writte, I didn't even notice I was reading about the harpy having sex. You know, when I read the title, I was TERRIFIED that it might be *cough, cough* a DIFFERENT Sayian banging the old b***h. Of course, since you CAN write a chapter in one sitting, you should have NO PROBLEM finishing "Kindred" now, should you?
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Title: Your evil
Reviewed By: AM On: April 16, 2004 17:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As if my day couldn't get bad enough! Chichi and Goku... I feel so... so.. betrayed! That's ok I just copy pasted and read it with the nasty error fixed. WOW you need to torture yourself more often and write! Stupid Barb you got talent you just refuse to admit it. >.< I loathe you and I am not sending Bardock... Goku where is your father? He went home. CCCCCCCCRRRRRRRRRAAAAAAPPPPPPPPP!!!!!
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