| "'life' and 'death'" Reviews/Comments [ 40 ] |
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Reviewed By: Rose of Sharon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2006 16:42 CST
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CHapter 12: Tai is such an idiot! I appreciate Kagome's self control, and I hate Tai for being such a shallow, arrogant, idiotic, jerk. He is! HE is such an idiot! Errrrggg....
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Reviewed By: Rose of Sharon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2006 16:32 CST
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Chapter Eleven: Whoa. Miroku is scared of Kagome. Did what happened in Kagome's dream happen in real life? That would be horrible. Is Rin dead? If she isn't - will she meet Sesshomarou? And isn't it rather bad to soak metal in sudsy water and expect it to keep an edge? I dunno. I just always thought that. Whatever floats your boat... and if it doesn't, I hope you can swim! *I dunno why I said that ::sigh::*
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Reviewed By: Rose of Sharon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2006 16:27 CST
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Chapter 10: Doesn't anyone realize the number of toxins in a cigarette? And the number of cancers/diseases/sicknesses it can give you? People are such idiots. *points at Tai* I wonder why Sesshomarou hasn't killed him yet, by the way. I would have killed him years ago if I were Sess.
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Reviewed By: Rose of Sharon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2006 15:31 CST
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Chapter 6: Whoa. Tai is such an idiot. How can he protect someone who is an infinitely better fighter than him? AND he runs away?
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Reviewed By: OrlandoLover [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2006 18:06 CDT
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loves the fic...the only confuzing part is when u start having alot of thought and each spreat thought is in the '' things 'so''the''entire''paragraph''ends''up''looking''like''this''and''it's''real ly''quite''confuzing''commas''would''be''much''better'...i hope u get my point...anyways update soon...SAVE THE EARTH IT'S THE ONLY PLANET WITH CHOCOLATE...Cheers
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Title: GinaCat
Reviewed By: GinaCat [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2006 00:11 CST
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I love this story can you please update it was sooooo good I need to know what happens please
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Title: GinaCat
Reviewed By: GinaCat [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2006 11:43 CST
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I love this story I hope you update it I am dieing to know what happens
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2004 01:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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can i give language a 20 count on this vote? you hit the mafia right on the head! excellet, and i mean, excellent job with the character dipictions, explinations, motivations and dialogue. i don't think i've been blown away by description in a long time like i was with this. excellent job. i love the line for Hojo (shaking hands like a girl..grr...i hate it when guys do that.) you have a great story here...now you need to finish it. or at least add to it. poor Sango...yash had to go to the mother, didn't he. hehe, i hope you choose to continue with the story. you have such great material here, its amazing. keep it up!
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Reviewed By: White Tiger Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2004 15:46 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great story! Can't wait for the next chap.
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Reviewed By: YokoXWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2004 20:37 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really great story in my opinion. I can't wait for the upcoming chapters.
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Reviewed By: Miztikal_Dragon nsi On: September 20, 2004 23:21 CDT
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w00t! lol please keep up the great work. I can't wait to find out what happens next.. I love this story so much! Krystal.
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Title: 'Life' and 'Death'
Reviewed By: Janie50989 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2004 21:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!GREAT STORY I REALLY LOVED IT!WELL GOTTA GO SEE YA!KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK AND UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: OhJoy [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2004 00:46 CDT
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Hey Aitu! You are the demi-god as your penname proclaims! I finally finished reading this awesome story. Wow!!! What do you have up your sleeve for the next chapter? I can hardly wait. Thank you for all your encouraging words on MY fan fic. *giggles and blushes* :) Joy
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Reviewed By: Miztikal_Dragon nsi On: September 05, 2004 03:31 CDT
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YAY! UPDATE! Please keep up the great work and update asap. I've been waiting for a new update in this stoy... I hope you get the next chapter out soon. I absolutely love your story! Krystal.
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Title: 'life' and 'death'
Reviewed By: Janeie50989 On: August 23, 2004 14:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story I loved it I hope you finsh it.Well later sorry for the short review but I've got other things to do.BYE!!!!
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