| "What Naruto Wants" Reviews/Comments [ 69 ] |
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Title: LOL
Reviewed By: Kagome_HHH [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2006 18:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol i love this! plz update
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Reviewed By: Isadora The Great [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2006 19:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're writing style is intresting and funny but, in the earlier chapters, you kept putting random author's notes in the middle of the story. It didn't look good and confused me. I have to commend you on knowing basic grammar and spelling, and certainly made your fic more enjoyable to read. Although the idea was not the most original one, you really added your own feel to it and gave it a fresh flavour. All in all, I found this fic a great read. The only thing that really detracts from it was the first three chapters, which were very messy and hard to read. Please keep up the good work, and don't give up on writing this story!
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Reviewed By: Naruto_Lovr [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2006 19:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
You continue now! Update soon.
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Reviewed By: Kasuka [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2006 14:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice work, its too funny!!!
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Reviewed By: el spazidente [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2006 08:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
friggin hilarious. ive read it like 5 times. and my sense of humor might be more twisted than yours. i think up stuff like insane squirrels that twitch all the time. squirrels that are as strong as a friggin bear. squirrels that rip peoples faces off. and twitch.
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Title: pixie
Reviewed By: pyropixie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2006 15:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It gets better every time I read it.
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Reviewed By: princess_shirley [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2006 00:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey!!! that was funny! i cracked up laughing when i heard hinata's, sasuke's kakashi's adn shino's thougths. you got to keep updating! well just update soon! cos your fic is really good!!
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Reviewed By: NekoKaru [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2006 15:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Haha...that was fantastic. I nearly fell out of my chair laughing when I first saw Hinata's thoughts. The smuttiness of the males is really quite amusing, too. Can't wait to see where you'll take this in the end (hint hint, update)
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Reviewed By: anime_gal1 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2006 19:02 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Iluv it iluv it i luv it!Udate soon and keep up the awsome work
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Reviewed By: je suis100 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2006 17:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awsome fic but does some of the characters have to be so perverted.Update soon and keep up the good work.
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Title: please update
Reviewed By: kunai [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2006 17:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please i demand you update
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Title: pixie
Reviewed By: pyropixie [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2006 17:11 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really,really, really good story but....longer chapters *whips you* (hinata style apparently,lol)
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Title: The father of all sick, funny crap
Reviewed By: Aikutsugan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2006 14:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
God, that was great, yet sick at the same time. Hinata has THOSE thoughts? I imagined something more...innocent. That thing about Sasuke in chapter 4 was sick, man! Keep up the good work!
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Title: TEHEHEE!!!
Reviewed By: vixypixy_no9 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2006 14:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Tehe!!! I luv it, I luv it, I LOVE IT! please don't stop writting thuis for a year again. This is one of the funniest Naruto fics of the site! Keep up the good work!
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Title: at last
Reviewed By: qt_angel [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2006 20:47 CST
Comment/Review:
that is so nice! please update again!!! i cant wait to see what happens next!! please! *makes puupy dog eyes*
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