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"Shiruri's return and Sesshoumaru's heart!" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ]
Reviewed By: blackjack_kat [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2004 20:44 CDT Comment/Review: Yeah, this is James from TC, nice start I can tell you've got a plot in mind, but your rushing too much and your screen play writing leaves a lot of detail out which I hate to see. I was also alittle confuse with the dream, so the dream is a flashback?
Title: ok Reviewed By: Inutaishos_Shadow_Tamer [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2004 20:20 CDT Comment/Review: ok gys if ur not crazy about this fanfic ill understand but please no insults ayway if u did lie it please review

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