| "My Project: Jounouchi Katsuya" Reviews/Comments [ 43 ] |
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Reviewed By: aknkkskd [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2007 00:36 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
fell over from hysterical laughter. it was so funny. but can you say cliffhanger. for being the last chapter you kept me wanting more. can't wait for your next story.
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Title: Yay!
Reviewed By: HappyDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2004 17:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
At first I was like, "Last Chapie? NNNNNUUUUUUUU!" And then I looked over and saw how long it was. Then I was like, "Ahhhh . . . everything will get all wrapped up ^.^" And so, now I gush about how utterly adorable the ending was, how the song fit perfectly, and how you handled stuff differently (and better) then I expected you would. SO I find myself still humming 'Accidentally In Love' (Ah, that was a funny movie) and thinking about the pair. I too will call for a sequel, if you would. The ending with the assembly just screams for follow up! Well, much luck in your writing, and Happy Holidays!
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Reviewed By: kerochan606 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2004 00:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great fanfic on how the relationship between Seto and Joey came to be. I actually cried at some points. It was that good... well, at least to me anyways.
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Reviewed By: Tamra of Egypt (not logged on) On: December 08, 2004 16:54 CST
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I gotta hand it to ya! this was GREAT! and i really enjoyed every single thing in the story! It had everything i was looking for: comedy, romance and some (a little) drama goin. But EVERYTHING was great and turned out nicely! ~ thankies - "Bon appetit!"
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Title: great ending
Reviewed By: sile On: December 08, 2004 13:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
loved the ending
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Reviewed By: anubiset (too lazy to log in) On: December 08, 2004 12:42 CST
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I loved that, You should do a sequel.
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Reviewed By: Fel5 On: November 01, 2004 18:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Weeeeeeeeeee, an update!^^ Hmmmm, I'm delighted to see, that you have vastly improved your grammar-the story is far smoother to read than prior, the flaws are minor at worst. Ohhh, loved the way Jou stuck Kaiba's words right back into his mouth '-a sleazy way to ask someone out on a date-' heheheee...^^ And Mokuba, a toe-sucker?(thinks, then snickers): Speak about embarassment. I liked the interaction between Asato and Jou, aswell as the face-off between Kaiba and Jou at school-poor CEO, two hits within ten minutes...yeowch! Ohh, and Jou's speech about the project and the psychological references-awesome! I think, it took me ten minutes just to pick up my jaw from the floor. Kaiba, Kaiba, Kaiba, has no one ever told you, that hacking into police and school reports is illegal? So much for respecting other's privacy...even if you did it in order to help Jou, that's *not* the way to do it...¬ ¬ Now I will lean back and wait for you to continue this wonderful plot..and stir my appetite and curiousity, as to what Jou might be cooking up for his brithday(no! That's *not* a pun! Honestly!o_0)...^^
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Title: I Love This
Reviewed By: HappyDragon(logged out) On: November 01, 2004 07:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fiction in so many different ways, for so many different reasons. I love your prespective of the chaaracters, I agree with your rant in the intro about how writers make Jou and Seto act. The plot is wonderful, more so since I have seen and own "Simply Irresistable". I like how all the characters are quietly develpoping, Seto is slowly opening up, becoming more human (hell, he doesn't even know how he feels about Jou yet). I think it's cute how when Jou panicks, he switches into overdrive and makes food at lightspeed. It was uber kawaii when Yugi's soulroom flooded with toys, poor Yami. There are just so many good things going on in this story, and I hope to read the further adventuers of this motly crew. P.S.: I'm making Jou a good cook in my fics because of you. XD
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Title: Fun!
Reviewed By: Callie1075 Offline On: October 20, 2004 21:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Funny! ^-^ I love the way Kaiba insults them, even in his mind... feel sorry for him though. But WAIT until he finds out about Joey's dad... o.O;
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Title: OMFG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Yamia [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2004 14:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMFG!!!!!!!!you have to hurry and update this story!!!!!!!this is getting really good!!!!!so please hurry and update!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: silen [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2004 07:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
great chapter. can't wait for the next one.
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Reviewed By: Tamra of Egypt (not logged in) On: October 16, 2004 16:40 CDT
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PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEeeZ update soon! ~ thankies!
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Title: update!!!yay!!!!
Reviewed By: Yamia [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2004 15:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay!!!you updated!!!!i really loved this chapter.i hope you can continue to update,i'll be waiting!!!ja!!
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Title: update!!!yay!!!!
Reviewed By: Yamia [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2004 15:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay!!!you updated!!!!i realy loved this chapter.i hope you can continue to update,i'll be waiting!!!ja!!
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Reviewed By: Madyamisam [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2004 16:29 CDT
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Author Note: *sigh* I can't seem to read the reviews people send me... T___T It's not fair. Anyway... I've just been on holiday which is why the update was slower than usual... I'll try to pick up the pace but two weeks of not being able to write anything makes my fingers slow...
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