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| "My Project: Jounouchi Katsuya" Reviews/Comments [ 43 ] | | Pages (3): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 ] | Reviewed By: Felidae5 On: June 10, 2004 19:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, grammar still sucks big time, but damn, if this story isn't one of the best funny ones out there! Kaiba:… HE'S A MORNING PERSON!!!!! ON A SATURDAY!!!! HE'S AN UNNATURAL, BRAINLESS, ABNORMAL, IDIOSYNCRATIC MORNING PERON!!!! I PICKED A MORNING PERSON TO DO MY PROJECT ON!?!?!?!? I keeled over laughing at that, I really did! Oh, and Jou facing the sea of damnation: "What bright side?!?" Very smooth, the Benny Hill reference(sigh, I loved that show...). Ahh, yes, the infamous 'Cloud of Doom'-if you like to see an impressive C.O.D, read Ranma 1/2, I think, it's the Tendo's special attack-poor Mokie! Oh, speaking of Mokuba, loved the crew's reaction to the 'Crab Napoléon', very kawaii!^^ And Jou's panicked "OMG, did I poison him?" was great! Otogi's cheerleaders, however-I can fully relate to Katsuya's need for smashing the chicken into pulp-hehehee, 'Norman Bates moment'? Nice description of the urge to inflict GBH on someone, I think, you just coined a classic phrase there... However, Mai turned out a little too bitchy for my taste, I can't really see her starting a food fight, but still-the image of Otogi and Kaiba engrossed in their crab, while plates are airborne around them... Now I have to go back to my empty fridge and nibble on a meager cucumber, while I dream of crabs and cesar salad and wait for the next chappie..sigh!
| Reviewed By: Madyamisam [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2004 03:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
Doesn't anybody find Joey's smartness over the top? I was aiming to keep him in character as much as possible.
| Reviewed By: puchita On: June 07, 2004 03:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my gooooood *.*..... never imagined this Joey you writted. Sorry is just to good and cuuuuute XD (smart Joey, kind of like Smat Xander from Buffy´s fanfics). Loved the way he interacts with his sister and Mokuba. You just have to keep updating this.
| Reviewed By: AreyaTomori [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2004 23:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have so totally gotta update this fic, it's awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
| Title: I'M REALLY LIKING THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Ceribi Motou [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2004 19:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*frolicking with bunnies in lala land* LOL, but the point is I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!! PLEASE CONTINUE!!!!!11
| Reviewed By: Madyamisam [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2004 07:32 CDT
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Madyamisam would like to say thanks for support for this story. This is my favourite story to write at the moment so I'm glad you enjoy it.
| Reviewed By: Rowan Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2004 17:19 CDT
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to quote McDonalds *cringes* "I'm Lovin' it!"
| Title: HAHAHAHAHAHA!!!
Reviewed By: Ceribi Motou [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2004 11:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT RA!!!!!!!!!!! THIS IS HALARIOUS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And how come I didn't know my beloved Seto couldn't cook?!?!? LOL!!!! But I really love this story!!! You MUST continue!!!!!!! -Ceribi
| Reviewed By: Felidae5 On: May 23, 2004 16:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn, I love Joey, especially 'hiding smart' Joey-and Seto Kaiba, the walking cooking catastrophe? I nearly fell off my chair when I imagined the hatched egg...and Kaiba's face, when he saw it, hahahahaa..!^^ You might do a little more spell-checks, but otherwise, this story is great(sheesh, tapping the phone? now, *that's* low, even or Kaiba)
| Reviewed By: Felidae5 On: May 21, 2004 18:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn, I love Joey, especially 'hiding smart' Joey-and Seto Kaiba, the walking cooking catastrophe? I nearly fell off my chair when I imagined the hatched egg...and Kaiba's face, when he saw it, hahahahaa..!^^ You might do a little more spell-checks, but otherwise, this story is great(sheesh, tapping the phone? now, *that's* low, even or Kaiba)
| Reviewed By: joeyrules [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2004 20:10 CDT
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Ack! Mwahaha! Your starting it! :huggles: Great job! Continue this one soon, i like it..
| Reviewed By: Rowan Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2004 17:22 CDT
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that was really creative! O.O He OWNS the restauraunt? o.O
| Reviewed By: SetoLover#? On: May 13, 2004 14:38 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved it!!! Very funny and creative! Sorry that I don't have time to write a long review, but... Anyways, keep up the good work -- and WRITE MORE QUICKLY!!! (thanx ^__^)
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