| "Ways To Convince" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Kage-Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2007 14:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
i agree with Rurouni Jasmine on this one so plz write it in ENGLISH
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Reviewed By: Amaya [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2004 19:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yeah. It wasn't vary readable. But I really wanted to know what happened, instead of waiting for when it may be fixed, I tried to read it anyway. I only got bits and parts( it is kinda difficult to peice together chopped up sentences in an ocean of unreadable characters) BUT I think i got the gist of it( is that how you spell gist?... oh well) and I can't wait for more!^_________^ I'm in a happy mood!
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Title: Chapter three
Reviewed By: AineSironaTsuki [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2004 22:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
I think the comp ate it. It isn't readable. But I like the story so far! ^_^
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Title: GREAT STORY!!!
Reviewed By: Kasemei [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2004 19:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok I LOVE THIS FIC! You gotta update!! also, your third chapter is screwed up. WHAT HAPPENES???????????????????????????????? PLEASE UPDATE!!
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Reviewed By: Rurouni Jasmine [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2004 16:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
I didn't exactly understand this chapter. It wasn't even in English but the other 2 chapters were good
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