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Title: Wow...
Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2005 18:44 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As much as I HATE reading stories that Vegeta cheats on Bulma vise/versa, this one is told rather well! What happened, did you decide not to finish it? It would be really interesting to see how Vegeta would win her back, even though i figure it would take some time for her to work out being so hurt and all. This was told objectively and realistically, showing his view (not getting attention, her working so much and brining up the kids). I felt her pain when she discovered them. I only hope one day you will finish it, great job!
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Title: please continue
Reviewed By: blue dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2005 03:22 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, what drama! Please continue this story! Not only is it well written and captivating, but it's also original. There aren't many -Vegeta cheated on Bulma- stories out there, and I believe this one is turning out to be a classic! LOL! I loved it and I hope you decide to continue this story, making me a very happy dragon!!! ^__^ Love, BD.
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Reviewed By: Spaz2450 On: September 02, 2005 00:23 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. I've never read a Vegeta/Bulma fanfic like this before, and I've read a lot of Vegeta/Bulma fanfics. I guess this is a side of the story I've been missing out on. After reading countless 'those three years' fics, this one is not only well written, but extremely refreshing. I can't wait until you update! Don't keep me hangin' for too long, please! -Spaz
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Title: hmmmm....
Reviewed By: Bura400(not signed in) On: August 20, 2005 05:45 PDT
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Okay..Lisa I did it I read it....I will admit it was hard to read Vegeta screwing Michelle. In my case my mother didn't shut my father out though, he shut *us* out..and then did his thing.....Bulma from what I have seen doesn't go "bitch" when angry/sad every time.....When she is really sad, she is more reserved and quiet. Like when Vegeta died in the Majin Buu saga, it's quiet and heart wrenching vs when Yaumcha died.....loud, noisy, and raging....There is two sides to every story, yes.....but infildelity is a far greater crime than shutting someone out do to grief in my eyes. This is very good Lisa and full of emotion. Even though it's always possible, I don't think Vegeta ever would though, he has a hard time trusting people...But this is more realistic then some....great job.....bura400
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Reviewed By: addict6606 On: July 19, 2005 18:46 PDT
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I really do hope you decide to continue writing this story. Two chapters in and its one of my favs EVER! Its so realistic and deals with something that most writers wouldnt want to associate with b/v but the way you write it i can see it happening! Please write moreif you still have the inspiration, if not i'll just continue reading these 2 chapters over and over!
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Reviewed By: Darke Angelus [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2004 10:53 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am giving you a "10" for writing a very believable, tho' heart-rending, tale of an act of ultimate betrayal. I can't hate Vegeta for his actions anymore than I can feel any pity for Bulma. The both of them are victims of their own weaknesses in this story: Bulma- for coping with her grief by immersing herself into the familliar routine of her company. Vegeta- for surrendering to Anger and reverting back to type. My father did the same thing, but it took years for me to realize that it was because mother had shut him out. If you have plans to continue this story (and I'm hoping that you will), I pray that Vegeta will get the understanding that he deserves and not be portrayed as a villain. Remember, there's ALWAYS two sides to a story. (And about Michelle?... Ah, my Dorothy Pereaux would have been really proud of her snicker)
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Reviewed By: draegon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2004 20:09 PDT
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I hope you're going to update soon, I'm really enjoying this fic.
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Reviewed By: jadew On: September 09, 2004 23:27 PDT
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it`s a good story but are you going to write another chapter or is it a unfinished story like so many others. Please do your readers a favor and tell us if you keep on writing this story or quitt it.
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Reviewed By: draegon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2004 12:02 PDT
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I think Vegeta is such a bastard for what he did, and got what he deserved. Despite what he previously thought, Bulma still loved him, even though she was distracted by CC. I wonder where Bulma went to and how is Vegeta going to get her back, if he can. In the end of this chapter, I think Michelle did the right thing by telling Vegeta to go after his wife. I'm guess she too noticed the pain that Bulma was showing. I'm also curious to find out what Trunks is going to do, since he saw what state his father was in.
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Reviewed By: Vejitalover [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2004 01:15 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh My God!!! You have to finish this. Poor Bulma... loosing her mother, her father, and then the love of her life all in one year! My heart is breaking for her. Do you plan to have a happy ending? Please update ASAP.
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Reviewed By: Fibounette On: July 16, 2004 15:12 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Incroyablement bien écrit... I love that story, Lisa. I know I won't find the right words to tell you why I do. So instead, I'll just tell you that I found it *amazing*, for lack of better words, and that I really cannot wait to see how it all pans out... Great job.
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Reviewed By: amy04 On: June 14, 2004 11:16 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was INTENSE, not what i thought would happen. it's so clear he still loves Bulma but i don't know how she can forgive him! you write so well, i am defintly adding this to faves. updaet soon!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 - Carla On: June 13, 2004 17:24 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, this certainly is interesting. Bulma had sort of a muted response... I would have expected her to throw a pure fit... but I guess the fact that she didn't is a testament to how deeply she has been hurt. It will be interesting to see how Bulma and Vegeta handle their emotions and each other.
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Reviewed By: ~JuSt-An_OuTcAsT~ [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2004 18:17 PDT
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This is a very nice take on the flaws of Vegeta and Bulma's relationship. I personally am a V/B fan but I have often explored the unfaithful thing. It is just more interesting. It has such attraction and allure. I applaud you for writing this and making it all seem so logical why it happened. Good job and I am looking foreward to the update. I found this awhile back and then coudn't find it again, but I am glad I did.
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Reviewed By: ~JuSt-An_OuTcAsT~ [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2004 18:15 PDT
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This is a very nice take on the flaws of Vegeta and Bulma's relationship. I personally am a V/B fan but I have often explored the unfaithful thing. It is just more interesting. It has such attraction and allure. I applaud you for writing this and making it all seem so logical why it happened. Good job and I am looking foreward to the update. I found this awhile back and then coudn't find it again, but I am glad I did.
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