| "Don't let go" Reviews/Comments [ 160 ] |
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Reviewed By: LoSt_gUrL8o8 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2004 04:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey...wow...really good cliffhanger...this story is really good and I hope u put more chapters up soon cuz I can't wait too see wut is goin to happen next so update soon please?...thanx
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2004 22:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think it's a good start you have here!! And don't feel bad. RedHerring is always mean in his/her reviews. In every story I've read and seen one of Red's reviews they've never been nice. Red always has something bad to say to any author in the rudest way possible. I don't see the point really, why be rude when people are more likly to take your advice if you're polite about it? Now, about those gammar errors. I think you should just go back after finishing every chapter and prof-read it yourself if you don't have spell check on your computer. Try reading it out loud to yourself and see if it sounds right. And some of the things you spelled wrong were "want" and you spelled it "wont". And ladys should be "ladies". There were also words missing in sentences, but really it wasn't anything too major. It's not like you butchered the english language or anything as Red would have you believe. Nobody spells everything right all the time, when a story appears that way it's because the author spent a lot of time going back over his/her work correcting things. So please keep writing and don't listen to rude reviews like Red's, as I said he/she is a jerk to everyone.
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Reviewed By: Lemony Fresh [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2004 18:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
well im not gunna FLAME you...just tell you what's wrong. here goes: you've got pretty bad spelling errors in the fic and grammatical errors too. i LOVE the plot of your fic but you need to use some kind of spell checker because some of the grammatical errors make it hard to understand. anyways, DO update! i wanna keep reading it ^.^
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Reviewed By: animeluver17 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2004 17:24 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very good plz update soon.
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Title: To Redharring:
Reviewed By: Little_Tennyo [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2004 16:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
If daniy wants to spell it like that she can do that. Its her fic. You ALWAYS critized people, when your own fics suck. Really you need to get a life and leave her alone! she does a GREAT job! And your summary's are the ones that suck! Now buzz off redharring, 'cause she has a good fic, and not in all country's are the names spelled the same ya know! To daniy, GREAT that you updated ^^ keep going I really like it. Just ignore Redharring okay ^^, bubai, K!$$ ~ Little Tennyo
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Reviewed By: RedHerring [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2004 14:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
Her name is spelled K-A-G-O-M-E (Kah-go-may). Not K-A-G-O-M-A(Kah-go-mah). Also, if you can't write a decent summary, then how do you expect people to think that you can write a good story?
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Title: YAY first one to review :P
Reviewed By: Little_Tennyo (to lazy to login) [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2004 06:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! I really like your fic. I hope you update soon ... when my computer stops being such a b!tch I'll put ya in my fav. list ^^ I really wanna know whats gonna happen so hope u can update soon! THNX's ... bubai, K!$$ and Love ~ Little Tennyo
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