| "The Mistress" Reviews/Comments [ 50 ] |
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Reviewed By: Sageling On: May 29, 2004 12:26 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very engaging start. I look forward to following the progress of this story.
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Reviewed By: Geta00 On: May 28, 2004 10:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok i kno I review on ff.net but this kick major ass.
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Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2004 18:24 EDT
Comment/Review:
This is really very good. I have read many "Bulma is Vegeta's slave" stories, and you're right, this one is different. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Venus(bulmasecrets) On: May 26, 2004 10:12 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
another great chap!
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Reviewed By: Venus(bulmasecrets) On: May 25, 2004 08:58 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it so far!
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