| "The Mistress" Reviews/Comments [ 50 ] |
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Reviewed By: pooki On: July 30, 2004 07:46 EDT
Comment/Review:
you really need to update
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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2004 23:46 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Every chapter you write gets better and better. I can't wait to see more.
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Reviewed By: feefee On: July 09, 2004 15:58 EDT
Comment/Review:
why havn't you updated yet?
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Reviewed By: widcha On: July 09, 2004 13:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GGGGGGRRAAAAAHHHHGGGG!!!!!! you just ended right there?! Wat is da madder widt you!!!!?????:( ... (pouts) grumble...grumble... grumble. hurry up with the next chapta will ya!!????:) thanks!!!
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Reviewed By: DarkPrincess (didn't want to sign in) On: June 22, 2004 22:13 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this chapter even though it is kind of late, but what can you do? Well I hope that you get that next chapter out. I loved this chapter it was sooooo good! You are a great writer and keep it up!
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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2004 23:17 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is outstanding! I really love it. You made the emthings they have for each other so different than other stories. I can't wait to see more.
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Reviewed By: feefee On: June 06, 2004 09:00 EDT
Comment/Review:
Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Mallie 3 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2004 05:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is A great fic!! The best Slave/Master Bulma/Vegeta i have read in a long time! I love thess kind of stories! I just hope the next chappie comes out soon I am look forward to it!!!
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Reviewed By: Nicka On: June 02, 2004 13:06 EDT
Comment/Review:
That was good.
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Reviewed By: Mals On: June 02, 2004 11:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey that was a great fist ....thingy i loved it more chappies to read!!
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Reviewed By: Fiore [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2004 08:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chp!
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Reviewed By: Mystical Mayhem On: June 01, 2004 08:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story! This really is something new and intriguing. I just feel sorry for poor Bulma, but I'm eager to find out what becomes of her. Please update soon
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Reviewed By: Fiore On: May 29, 2004 17:46 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
How comes I've never seen u around befor? You're really good!
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Title: Original!
Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2004 16:35 EDT
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I am usually bored unto death with the Bulma as slave/mistress stories yet this one peaked my interest. You've set up a great psychological dynamic here, and the characters are vivid, recognizable and yet not same-old-same-old! You weren't kidding--fresh!! Looking fwd to reading more of your work. debbiechan
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Reviewed By: COOL [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2004 12:55 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWESOME DUDE, TOTALLY COOL.
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