| "The Mistress" Reviews/Comments [ 50 ] |
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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2004 23:17 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is outstanding! I really love it. You made the emthings they have for each other so different than other stories. I can't wait to see more.
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Reviewed By: feefee On: June 06, 2004 09:00 EDT
Comment/Review:
Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Mallie 3 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2004 05:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is A great fic!! The best Slave/Master Bulma/Vegeta i have read in a long time! I love thess kind of stories! I just hope the next chappie comes out soon I am look forward to it!!!
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Reviewed By: Nicka On: June 02, 2004 13:06 EDT
Comment/Review:
That was good.
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Reviewed By: Mals On: June 02, 2004 11:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey that was a great fist ....thingy i loved it more chappies to read!!
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Reviewed By: Fiore [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2004 08:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chp!
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Reviewed By: Mystical Mayhem On: June 01, 2004 08:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story! This really is something new and intriguing. I just feel sorry for poor Bulma, but I'm eager to find out what becomes of her. Please update soon
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Reviewed By: Fiore On: May 29, 2004 17:46 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
How comes I've never seen u around befor? You're really good!
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Title: Original!
Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2004 16:35 EDT
Comment/Review:
I am usually bored unto death with the Bulma as slave/mistress stories yet this one peaked my interest. You've set up a great psychological dynamic here, and the characters are vivid, recognizable and yet not same-old-same-old! You weren't kidding--fresh!! Looking fwd to reading more of your work. debbiechan
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Reviewed By: COOL [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2004 12:55 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWESOME DUDE, TOTALLY COOL.
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Reviewed By: Sageling On: May 29, 2004 12:26 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very engaging start. I look forward to following the progress of this story.
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Reviewed By: Geta00 On: May 28, 2004 10:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok i kno I review on ff.net but this kick major ass.
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Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2004 18:24 EDT
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This is really very good. I have read many "Bulma is Vegeta's slave" stories, and you're right, this one is different. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Venus(bulmasecrets) On: May 26, 2004 10:12 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
another great chap!
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Reviewed By: Venus(bulmasecrets) On: May 25, 2004 08:58 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it so far!
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