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Title: The Mistress
Reviewed By: mlf On: December 10, 2004 17:54 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
CONGRAGULATION on your birth of your son i'm so happy for you....i hope that he's in good health and you too...great charter...can't wait to read more when you have the TIME lol...maria
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Reviewed By: devil1sh On: November 14, 2004 17:31 EST
Comment/Review:
can i just say soz for not reviewing sooner cuz this is da best fic evr!
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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2004 17:20 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter, and I'm so happy for you and your son, he'll be wonderful. Take your time with the cahpter, we'll still be here.
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Reviewed By: me On: November 08, 2004 05:03 EST
Comment/Review:
good
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Title: The Mistress"
Reviewed By: mlf On: November 07, 2004 21:56 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
why didn't she tell vegeta about the man who can to kill her..man what is he going to do when he finds out that she left him..i want more to read...oh and i'm so happy for you and your soon to be baby boy...i just got a baby boy lab named VEGETA... I HOPE YOU UPDATE SOON..MARIA
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2004 18:25 EST
Comment/Review:
Wow. Great story man. Keep up the excellent work. coolsa.
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Reviewed By: Ariyana On: November 07, 2004 18:22 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful chapter, wonderful story, overall you are a wonderful writer. Congratulations and my best wishes for a healthy, safe and fast delivery. ^_^
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Reviewed By: me On: November 04, 2004 01:27 EST
Comment/Review:
UPDATE
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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2004 18:51 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter!! I loved that little detour through their first time. Looks like trouble is brewing up for Bulma with her baby on the way. I hope Vegeta comes in a proves to be the loving an to her in the end. Hurry with the next one please!!!!
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: devil1sh On: September 24, 2004 01:32 EDT
Comment/Review:
firstly great news on the baby! secondly this is a terrific fic!
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Title: The Mistress"
Reviewed By: mlf On: September 23, 2004 20:52 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow great story so sad...i feel for bulma so much ...what is going to do..please get her off this planet soon..i do feel that he loves her but he's the king and if the queen finds out...as much as i want them together i want the to be with each other forever..please update soon..and congrats on the baby...maria
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Title: The Mistress"
Reviewed By: mlf On: September 23, 2004 20:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow great story so sad...i feel for bulma so much ...what is going to do..please get her off this planet soon..i do feel that he loves her but he's the king and if the queen finds out...as much as i want them together i want the to be with each other forever..please update soon..and congrats on the baby...maria
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Title: Me Again ^_^
Reviewed By: empressariyana [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2004 13:35 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like how you expanded the backstory. This chapter was well worth the wait. It occured to me I wasn't sure which review of mine you meant. If you meant the one on inspiration or you meant the one where I asked shouldn't she be pregnant. I promise you I'm not a mind reader but I do have a knack for seeing what others ignore. If you need someone to bounce ideas off of or just talk I would be glad to listen or help if I can. empressariyana@yahoo.com Again congratulations *hugs back*
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Reviewed By: Miso On: September 20, 2004 03:39 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is interesting
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Title: Please Update This!
Reviewed By: empressariyana [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2004 20:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am guessing that you have lost inspiration for this story but I do wish you would continue. I love your Fruba story very much but this story is just as good. I'm hoping you'll update this story someday because I hate to be left hanging. You're such a good writer.
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