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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2004 18:25 EST Comment/Review: Wow. Great story man. Keep up the excellent work. coolsa.
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Reviewed By: Ariyana On: November 07, 2004 18:22 EST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Wonderful chapter, wonderful story, overall you are a wonderful writer. Congratulations and my best wishes for a healthy, safe and fast delivery. ^_^
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Reviewed By: me On: November 04, 2004 01:27 EST Comment/Review: UPDATE
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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2004 18:51 EST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Great chapter!! I loved that little detour through their first time. Looks like trouble is brewing up for Bulma with her baby on the way. I hope Vegeta comes in a proves to be the loving an to her in the end. Hurry with the next one please!!!!
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Title: wow Reviewed By: devil1sh On: September 24, 2004 01:32 EDT Comment/Review: firstly great news on the baby! secondly this is a terrific fic!
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Title: The Mistress" Reviewed By: mlf On: September 23, 2004 20:52 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: wow great story so sad...i feel for bulma so much ...what is going to do..please get her off this planet soon..i do feel that he loves her but he's the king and if the queen finds out...as much as i want them together i want the to be with each other forever..please update soon..and congrats on the baby...maria
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Title: The Mistress" Reviewed By: mlf On: September 23, 2004 20:51 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: wow great story so sad...i feel for bulma so much ...what is going to do..please get her off this planet soon..i do feel that he loves her but he's the king and if the queen finds out...as much as i want them together i want the to be with each other forever..please update soon..and congrats on the baby...maria
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Title: Me Again ^_^ Reviewed By: empressariyana [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2004 13:35 EDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I like how you expanded the backstory. This chapter was well worth the wait. It occured to me I wasn't sure which review of mine you meant. If you meant the one on inspiration or you meant the one where I asked shouldn't she be pregnant. I promise you I'm not a mind reader but I do have a knack for seeing what others ignore. If you need someone to bounce ideas off of or just talk I would be glad to listen or help if I can. empressariyana@yahoo.com Again congratulations *hugs back*
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Reviewed By: Miso On: September 20, 2004 03:39 EDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: this is interesting
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Title: Please Update This! Reviewed By: empressariyana [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2004 20:06 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I am guessing that you have lost inspiration for this story but I do wish you would continue. I love your Fruba story very much but this story is just as good. I'm hoping you'll update this story someday because I hate to be left hanging. You're such a good writer.
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Reviewed By: pooki On: July 30, 2004 07:46 EDT Comment/Review: you really need to update
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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2004 23:46 EDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Every chapter you write gets better and better. I can't wait to see more.
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Reviewed By: feefee On: July 09, 2004 15:58 EDT Comment/Review: why havn't you updated yet?
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Reviewed By: widcha On: July 09, 2004 13:24 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: GGGGGGRRAAAAAHHHHGGGG!!!!!! you just ended right there?! Wat is da madder widt you!!!!?????:( ... (pouts) grumble...grumble... grumble. hurry up with the next chapta will ya!!????:) thanks!!!
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Reviewed By: DarkPrincess (didn't want to sign in) On: June 22, 2004 22:13 EDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I loved this chapter even though it is kind of late, but what can you do? Well I hope that you get that next chapter out. I loved this chapter it was sooooo good! You are a great writer and keep it up!
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