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Reviewed By: Lollie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2009 17:25 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wish you would continue this story. The status says completed and you have not updated since 2004, but I can still hope right? Your writing was wonderful and I cannot believe you stopped at such a intriguing part.
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Reviewed By: VenusLegacy (not logged) On: December 10, 2006 05:25 EST
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I am really enjoying this story so far, I love the way you portray the complex dynamics of Bulma and Vegeta's relationship, the way Bulma tries to fight against her feelings but must inevitably succomb to them, the bitter hatred at her situation yet intense passion for the man who is the cause of it. Its a very fascinating plot, i do hope your enjoyment for writing this story has not faded, as I found it a pleasure to read, very different from other A/U fics I have read, as you show the couples relationship bubble under different circumstances. I wonder what will happen to Bulma now she has escaped, where we she go? how will her preganancy turn out? What will Vegeta do? And how will the conflict with the other warrior race plan out, will Vegeta be successful in expanding his father's empire? What will happen to Cerna once the heir has been born? So much to look forward to, well done!
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Reviewed By: chiku [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2006 16:20 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a brilliant story its a shame you decided not to finish it...
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Reviewed By: guyanagal [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2006 03:39 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is the best story i ever read please update
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Reviewed By: Vegetaslindalou On: July 26, 2005 15:24 EDT
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This is a great story. Please update soon. I have come back a few times for an update and it hasn't happened. Hope all is well with you.
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Reviewed By: CC199 On: February 13, 2005 04:35 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wowwhat a brilliant story i have read it in fanfic.net and hoped that you possiblly abandoned ff and updated mm, i have been waiting along time and so have all your other fans. Hope your son is well :0) please update soooooooon cindy
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Reviewed By: feefee On: December 13, 2004 00:40 EST
Comment/Review:
soz i havnt reviewed in like years! cool u had a baby that is so cool this ch woz amasing
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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2004 18:28 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohhhhh!! I'm so happy for you!! I bet he's going to be wonderful and is incredibly cute. This was an awesome chapter; so full of suspense. Can't wait to see the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: hmmmm On: December 11, 2004 05:37 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is quite good, congratulations on your baby nathan (cool name)
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Reviewed By: spini On: December 11, 2004 04:50 EST
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Hey Congratulation on your birth of your son! I hope you too are alright! Nathan Alexander...a beautiful name! So Bulma finally made her escape! Can´t wait for Vegetas reaction! But take your time! We´ll wait forever!lol love ya
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Title: The Mistress
Reviewed By: mlf On: December 10, 2004 17:54 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
CONGRAGULATION on your birth of your son i'm so happy for you....i hope that he's in good health and you too...great charter...can't wait to read more when you have the TIME lol...maria
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Reviewed By: devil1sh On: November 14, 2004 17:31 EST
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can i just say soz for not reviewing sooner cuz this is da best fic evr!
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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2004 17:20 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter, and I'm so happy for you and your son, he'll be wonderful. Take your time with the cahpter, we'll still be here.
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Reviewed By: me On: November 08, 2004 05:03 EST
Comment/Review:
good
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Title: The Mistress"
Reviewed By: mlf On: November 07, 2004 21:56 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
why didn't she tell vegeta about the man who can to kill her..man what is he going to do when he finds out that she left him..i want more to read...oh and i'm so happy for you and your soon to be baby boy...i just got a baby boy lab named VEGETA... I HOPE YOU UPDATE SOON..MARIA
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