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Title: Oh yeah!
Reviewed By: ssp51201 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2004 07:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! It fits! The story and how the characters all have their skeletons and their own regrets. I like it! I especially think they are put in the right positions, and I can't wait to read more! Man, the more of your fics I read, the more I like your style of writing! You're on my favorites list, just to let you know. Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: Elisa On: June 29, 2004 18:30 CDT
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Poor Miroku, he's being totally mistreated by Sango. I hope she realizes what she's doing soon because I don't think he'll take it for much longer. I can't wait to see Kagome's reaction when Inuyasha asks her out on a date. That will be interesting since she is still afraid of him.
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Reviewed By: inu.ob On: June 28, 2004 15:49 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, thanks for emailing me! I didn't really know this story existed but now that I do, I say it's awesome. Keep writing soon... I know soon will be a while, but I can wait for good stories. I love it when Inuyasha and Kagome get together and this story sorta has a twist, forcing them to be together. Weeeh! I love it! inuyasha_obsession (inu.ob)
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Reviewed By: RedHerring [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2004 10:08 CDT
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sweet
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Reviewed By: Inubunny [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2004 08:22 CDT
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hehehe!! that was great!! now about the date! kagome has to say yes first i no! but she should have to think about it first and if she says yes!! then the first date should b some were interesting!! it has to b really interesting!! like... well that i still have to figure out but the first date always has to b interesting!! like mine was hehe~! well lets not go there. hope u update soon!! much love never forget the love!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: EbilJo [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2004 20:26 CDT
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Oi! This is a really good fanfic so far. I really like the stories where all the characters are put in a modern time, but their characteristics and jobs are the same (i.e. Yash still being demon, Sango still a demon hunter) Yash doesn't seem like a hugantic jerk in this story, which is always good, because I think other writers (incluing myself) always over-play the jerkiness. He seems tough, but not dumb. My favorite scene: bus ride to the club. Heh heh, that pervy monk being pervy to under-age girls. *giggle* He's a strange one, alright. Yup, a REALLY REALLY good story so far, and I encourage you to update very soon, because I'm addicted to it so far. Keh, many many hugs and thank yous, Jo
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Reviewed By: Inubunny [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2004 08:52 CDT
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i can not wait to c what happens next!!! plz update soon!!! much love!!! never forget the love!!!
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Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2004 03:52 CDT
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I'm intrigued. This is a slight twist on a recycled idea. I like the way you have everyone's character. And I'm definitely going to stick around to see what happens next. Your writing is easy to follow you give me enough detail so I can see the scenes in my mind. I wonder why Sango wants to keep Miroku at a distance. There has to be more behind that. Her brother will most likely be a slightly bigger role in this story. Congrats for working in Kirara. And how exactly is InuYasha going to keep from killing Kagome? I'm sure there is a loop hole in Sesshomaru's rules, they just have to find it. My one complaint is his explaination of how he thinks he needs Kagome. As long as you don't go to far with this it won't feel to unrealistic. And Ayame hitting Koga and Kagome relaxing around Sango were funny. I had a good little giggle over them. A good start to what I hope will be a great story. Be waiting for your next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Shaid [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2004 23:36 CDT
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seems to be going pretty well so far. I'm interested in seeing more!
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Reviewed By: Kagamiko [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2004 23:43 CDT
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Please update! That was really good, and can't wait 'til the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Shaid [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2004 20:34 CDT
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Good so far. Please write more!
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Reviewed By: Miroku's Sweet Baby On: May 28, 2004 17:17 CDT
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UPDATE PLEASE!!!!!! PERTY PERTY PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: ~*Ayumi*~
Reviewed By: o__o [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2004 20:22 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Namvy-Pamby? o_O What is that? Anyway, this is '~*Ayumi*~.' I liked this story so far. . .its really original and really funny. Keep writing, I can't wait 4 more soon. I hope you're ok/ getting better. Yea. . .Kagome kinda vomited a lot. . .but it was still good. Aww, I wanna know how Sango feels about Miroku. . .like, more then 'Phuck Buddies' or just 'Phuck Buddies?' Well, I guess thats it. TaTa! ~*Ayumi*~
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Title: nice story!
Reviewed By: Gina ^_^ On: May 25, 2004 18:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I usually don't read fanfics, but because it said hentai, I was fascinated. This is actually a pretty good chapter. I would most likely want to read the next! Good details!
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Reviewed By: MIztikal_Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2004 01:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol well that' was great. I can't wait to read more. Poor kagome.. well lol i just can't stop laughing. Keep up the great work. YAY!! i get to be the first reviewer! Muhahahaz Krystal.
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