| "Inevitable" Reviews/Comments [ 93 ] |
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Reviewed By: flowers [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2004 02:13 CDT
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I just wanted to drop a quick note for ALL to see. You trully are very talented! To even think up a twist like this is proof enough for me. Life isn't all kisses and chocolate, you bring things back into a realistic perspective. Kudos kudos kudos...
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Reviewed By: Cindyve13 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2004 08:42 CDT
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hmm that was kind of deppressing. But the story is interesting. I like how you changed up the whole happily ever after ending and made it more like real life. I hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2004 23:37 CDT
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this is a great fanfic please update soon
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Reviewed By: angel0fs0rr0w666 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2004 13:09 CDT
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please update!!! i like it soo much! gosh, inu yasha likes it rough... everyone has their problems, i like that. lol, please update, SOON!!!
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2004 00:50 CDT
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this is a great fanfic please update soon
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Title: Good job ;)
Reviewed By: rayjayiscrazy [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2004 19:45 CDT
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That's pretty good and It's in character. I wouldn't really describe the first interaction between Kagome and Inuyasha as romantic and you did a good job of portraying it.
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2004 18:20 CDT
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Excellent! I like this fic! Update soon, please. Thanks!
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Title: good stuff
Reviewed By: smittin kittin [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2004 16:11 CDT
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Wow! This story is so not what I expected! I was pleasantly surprised by your aproach to a popular theme. It's refreshing to read a fic. that deals with a less than ideal coupling without it being violent or dark. In my opinion you are remaining true to Kag's character by having her keep quiet about her concerns & disapointment due to her deep love for Inu. I am curious to know why she is allowing herself to become meak in her relationship with Inu now that they are mated. Is he acting more dominering or does she feel compelled to obey him now that she belongs to him completly? OK sorry for rambling on. I enjoyed reading it so far hope you write more soon!
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Reviewed By: ME On: June 01, 2004 15:50 CDT
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Great chapter!! I could've sworn I already left a review.......but, anyway--I can definitely see Inu as very 'instinctual'--it'll be interesting to see how 'the morning after' unfolds. Can't wait for your next update!!
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2004 00:34 CDT
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Please keep going with this story. I like it. You are doing pretty good without a beta reader but there are several mistakes that I noticed. The most obvious one was in the sentence "I have scolded myself for divulging in such brief interludes..." where instead of 'divulging', I think you meant to use the word 'indulging'. Also, toward the end of chapter 2, you left out the 'n' in the word 'landing' when Inuyasha jumped into Kagome's bedroom. There are other minor mistakes but you have excellent grammar skills and I am enjoying your story. Please update soon. Thanks!
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2004 00:20 CDT
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this is a good story please update soon
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Reviewed By: luna_sea [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2004 17:15 CDT
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Wow... That's all I can really say ^^;; Just.. Wow.
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Reviewed By: Liquidlady On: May 28, 2004 16:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The only thing I can really say is "...DAMN!!!" I have read many sex scenes between Kagome and InuYasha, but this one seemed more realistic. I would feet cheated too. I liked it though because it wasn't the cutesy fluff that you usually get. Good job!!
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Reviewed By: E. Marie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2004 16:06 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dark themes, huh? I'm looking forward to seeing this continue, it's interesting to see someone approach Kag/Inu from this perspective...update soon!
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Reviewed By: w_j (not logged in) On: May 28, 2004 12:27 CDT
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Excellent beginning! Please continue! Thanks!
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