| "Unexpected Developements" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
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Reviewed By: sunshine07 On: August 08, 2004 10:44 CDT
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good chappy. update soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: duke of spades On: August 01, 2004 13:12 CDT
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^____________________________^ you so have to update this are you on fanfiction.net???!!!! this is an awsome story its got my attention!!! no doubt!!!! see ya
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Reviewed By: Assh [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2004 17:48 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very interesting story you have hear, though I'm a bit miffed about the ending of the last chapter. I'm not too fond of Inuyasha turning Kagome into a mindless drone like Kikyo; I think that's just making her useless and giving him reason to stick with Kikyo. (Can you tell I don't like the clay zombie too much?) I personally think he should start seeing her in a different light, but that's just me; you keep writing it the way you want to because I'll still read it, no matter what.
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Title: Oh My!
Reviewed By: VeRoN [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2004 00:52 CDT
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That was really good! You have finally updated, yay! I love this story so much.Please don't let us hanging too long, though I now it is hard to update when you have things to do... But, just another one, please, please, pretty please? Update soon, and make them have another little scene like this last one, that was great.
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Reviewed By: sunshine161820 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2004 21:05 CDT
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That was a good chappy!!! plz update soon!!!!!
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Reviewed By: angl4u2luv [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2004 18:21 CDT
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I am gonna keep this sweet and simple Good story update soon I mean REAL soon!
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Reviewed By: Suzuko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2004 15:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please oh please write more soon its getting really good and I want ta read more
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Reviewed By: sunshine161820 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2004 13:23 CDT
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when r u gonna update!!!!!! hopefully really really soon!!!!!!!!!! : )
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Title: Great!
Reviewed By: VeRoN [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2004 21:57 CDT
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That was a great chapter and it was not at all confusing, keep it up! I realy want to now the reaction of Inu towards Kag. Please update ASAP!
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Reviewed By: sunshine07 On: June 16, 2004 14:32 CDT
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that was good!!!! i didn't get lost....i understood what u were writen : ) Plz update really really soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: musheesuh On: June 16, 2004 08:52 CDT
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nice update. keep writing! =)
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Reviewed By: luna chick (not signed in) On: June 16, 2004 07:54 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice chapter, but you left it at the best part. I'm dying to know what happens when they meet.
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Title: valene
Reviewed By: valene [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2004 06:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it keep it going*_*
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Reviewed By: sunshine161820 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2004 22:21 CDT
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when r u gonna UPDATE??????????? i like this story and i wanna know what happens between them!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: musheesuh On: June 14, 2004 10:26 CDT
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nice story. keep udating. it's getting interesting. so she's french? =)
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