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Title: Needed (chapter 7)
Reviewed By: Dianna On: July 30, 2004 18:07 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter! Can't wait for the next one! ^_^
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Reviewed By: butterflyV On: July 30, 2004 17:55 PDT
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What's the bet that Bulma will call uopn the dragon to wish away the memory of her affair.
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Title: needed
Reviewed By: mlf On: July 30, 2004 15:26 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NO NO NO why do you think that you need to use the dragonballs.in life there is no dragonballs.you have to work things out on your own.she made a mistake we all do.if the love was ther like it should be then he should forgive her...if not then leave forever.and what was the senses that he finished the bond and told her what he did, if it meant nothing...i'm waithing for answers...so please update soon.maria
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Title: THIS IS GREAT
Reviewed By: PELUO On: July 25, 2004 20:53 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW i LOVE THIS FIC!!!! KEEP WRITING
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Title: Needed (chapters 1-6)
Reviewed By: Dianna On: July 20, 2004 20:08 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now this is a Bulma/Vegeta fic that I can actually get into!! You've captured my interest!! Now I'm going to be wondering what will happen to them! Will they ever get back together?! I need to know!!! Please update soon!! You're doing great!!
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Title: needed
Reviewed By: mlf On: July 20, 2004 05:46 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG...that was so sad.you see i told you not to let her cheat know look at what you did...lol...wow that a very good chapter,and i can't wait to read what happens next because i have no clue.i know that shes hurt but that was her fault.i do feel sorry for her and vegeta...please please update soon...maria
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Reviewed By: NJN [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2004 22:35 PDT
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Title: Goat
Reviewed By: NJN [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2004 22:35 PDT
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I have read other fanfiction where Bulma cheats on Vegeta and he becomes a big pussy about it and says he's sorry like it's his fault. I would like to thank you for writing how Vegeta would react. Now someone needs top die.
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Reviewed By: butterflyV On: July 09, 2004 16:58 PDT
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It makes me wonder that if Bulma even showered at all before she went to Goku's house to talk to ChiChi, because if not, Goku's saiyan sense of smell must have surely picked up something other than the smell of food.
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Reviewed By: butterflyV On: July 06, 2004 17:37 PDT
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Since saiyans have a keen sense of smell, it'll be interesting to see Vegeta's reaction in the next chapter.
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Title: needed
Reviewed By: mlf On: July 05, 2004 15:49 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh i HATE the fact that she cheated on vegeta.i hope that he finds out.it's not fare.every couple has problems that doesn't mean that you go and cheat on them.and what just to come home and make up like that no way vegeta is smarter then that.i hope that this will change soon.i'm disappointed in this story .......sorry maria
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Reviewed By: butterflyV On: June 22, 2004 02:25 PDT
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Hopefully Bulma will see why Vegeta holds so dear to him the laws of his home planet like being with one mate for life and how cheating led to death.
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Title: needed
Reviewed By: mlf On: June 21, 2004 04:28 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow.i know that her relationship with vegeta is a hard one but i can't picture her with another man no matter what.you know he can get.and after you had a vegeta why would you go running to another man.i know that she needs someone to talk to but not cheat.it's wrong.but it's your story...i just wnat to see what happens next...maria
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Reviewed By: Lou Lou On: June 11, 2004 19:33 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a really great start. Although I don't like the idea of Bulma pairing up with someone diffrent in the future, this is begining to get very interesting. Very Original plot, I like that. I can't wait to read more...
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Title: Starbrella
Reviewed By: Star-brella [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2004 09:47 PDT
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Wow! i like this story plot alot! I've just read a fic thats vegeta cheating on Bulma and now your fic about bulma cheating on Vegeta. You have to update soon! you can't leave me hanging like this! PLZ update! I wonder who bulma's lover is? since it's an OC it won't be yamcha right?
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